What is your opinion?
Catalyst
"This was a great story I enjoyed. It was an amazing combination of fantasy and action which I really enjoyed. The plot was fast-paced and intriguing and the characters were also excellent. I didn't expect to like this story but I really enjoyed reading it. The writing style was likable and worked for the story. There were a few grammar mistakes that interrupted the flow of the story, but that is easily fixed with a little editing Overall it was a great story!"
Catalyst
"Very well written story with great imagination."
Brilliant!❤️
"Collen, negan, Sam, Sarah...Wuah!A really good book, something I like about books are the characters in the book....Waiting for more works! All the very best! Cheers to the author "
Catalyst- The Journey Begins
"This is a really amazing piece of writing, with only very few grammar mistakes in every other chapter or so, I would heavily recommend this to anyone who has a nice feel for fantasy, action, anything like that. The first few chapters were a roller coaster of emotions for me and rushes of energy along with it. I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to future pieces of work from this author."
It surprised me!
"I was a bit hesitant to read this because it is not like most of the books I am interested in, but It ended up being really good. I encourage you to continue writing. The style was a little bit different than i was used to and the font threw me off a little bit, but overall it was great. One suggestion that I have is to work on your punctuation and maybe the different fonts."
Awesome
"So intriguing! From the beginning, I was hooked from the very beginning. The grammar could use a little work but overall, I loved the characters and I thought that the plot was so interesting. You are so talented!"
Catalyst- The Journey Begins
"First off, I'm really hooked with the summary itself 😍😍 It immediately made me wanna read the rest of the story 🤩🤩🤩 As for the story, it really got me intrigued! I really liked that this story was kinda connected to the Science subject when you referred to the Sun, the Moon, human, animals and more (≧▽≦) The backstory of the Light Being and the Dark being was fantastic as well 😄❤️ I also really liked how the small brown haired boy was the only one listening to the priest 🦋💞 If it was me, I would've been like playing with my fingers for no reason ✌️, looking at the clock every minute ⏰, thinking about food 🥨🌮 and the list just goes on and on 😂❤️ This is a really great start for your book 📖💕 I'm really looking forward to reading the whole book if I can 😁💞 There were a few grammar mistakes but I don't really mind 'em ♡♡ I don't really care much about the grammar mistakes as long as I can understand the story, then that should be enough ✍️😌 Again, I just wanna say that this is absolutely a great start and a great book ❣️ Keep up with the good work 😜👍 Until then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"
Action packed!
"If you like action stories, this one is for you. It takes place in a mysterious, fantasy world that closely resembles earth. Suitable for young adults also as there are no vulgar scenes or bad language. The grammar is a bit of a problem, but it usually is with a first draft book. Keep up the good work. 👍"
Catalyst - The Journey Begins
"Love it want more"
Good
"The opening scene of the prologue could have had a little more emotion to it, rather than just information (since it'll determine if the readers stay or not). Scene transitions should be a little smoother, although you get better at that as the story progresses. Lastly, character descriptions could be more elaborate (for example in the first chapter you used 'pretty' to describe both the girls). I say this because the way you describe the setting/surrounding is remarkably better. It's good to see that something's always going on (the plot is paced well), and the story has a clear dystopian vibe to it."
Easy Read
"The story and plot are well built, but the grammar takes away a bit of the reading. Overall, if you like fantasy stories, you will enjoy this tale."
RPG-inspired fantasy adventure
"Overall, I found this story interesting. It has a linear plotting and it wasn't bad either because the world unfolds itself chapter by chapter; and surprising twists (especially at the ending, so better watch out). My only main concern is the technical writing. It needs more improvement as of now. All in all, you've got an amazing story here, a weapons-master and a girl as a weapon (who, I hope, would be his love interest in the next chapters). Keep up the good work. :)"
Catalyst - The Journey Begins
"This story has you hooked from the very first chapter! There are a few grammar issues but it doesn't take away the flow of the story! I love the plot of this story, it's so unique! I'm hoping for a second one because it ends of on a little cliffhanger and I was super sad that it ended!! Great work!"
Catalyst
"March 3 2021 ... with work and time this writer could create some decently interesting stories. This is story is a nice opening to something more. I this tale selected Teens take on magical weapons/implements. While reading could see it as the opening to an animated or anime series."
