What is your opinion?
Codex Mortem
"I really like the twist put in for the werewolf/vampire background. Very unique and interesting! So glad I read this during my breaks at work, kept me wondering what would happen next. Looking forward to more chapters! 😁👍"
Binge Reading💯♥️
"Such an amazing Storyline Not the same typical story of werewolf and vamps so much better than most of stories that are first books of new writers , so well written things makes sense while reading you don’t get confused as to what is happening, STORY LINE IS VERY STRONG AND BEAUTIFUL ♥️ WORTH READING FOR 💯🌸🌸Character development, UNIQUE STORY AND MUCH DRAMA can’t wait to read more🌷💕being new writer you have so much potential 👍this books gonna be great 😌 "
Codex Mortem
"A little confusing at the beginning, but the detail helped a lot. The grammar was spot on and I loved it! It was very clear for me to read and as an avid reader, it's a dream come true. I cannot wait to read the next bit!"
Amazing story
"I love this story not just because it's diffrent but because it dosen't follow the typical werewolves stories patterns. I just can't wait for more chapters!!!!! "
A must read
"It is the first fantasy story that kept me hooked from the beginning to the last posted chapter. It has an interesting plot, smooth flow of the action, humor insertions making the reading pleasant and catchy. Well done, author! Waiting for more chapters. "
Codex mortem
"Very interesting story,ill wait for more chapters"
Different and interesting!
"A really interesting story so far. I did find it confusing when it flipped between different narrators, so maybe signposting that would help. But it really drew me in and after some more editing, I think this could be a really good read. Well done and keep up the good work! "
Amazing story. A must read for sure.
"Genuinely love the story so far. I'm not a huge fan of warewolf stories, but this one honestly got me hooked, and I want to read more. I'll patiently wait for the next chapters, and wish you the best of luck with your amazing story 👍🏻"
Codex mortem
"Interesting idea of the story, I really wanted to read something special. I would like to get to the end with it but it left a very good impression on me from the beginning. Good luck and I look forward to writing regularly. By the way: For me the orography is not interesting, as long as the story continues."
Clarisa47
"Such a great story so far, i especially love the relationship between dawn and her mother I wanted to read more...I was sad when she died amazing twist to her afterlife.. hurry I want to see what happens next!"
Interesting
"I love this story so far, and I just wait for more! The style is a bit strange, but I got used to it. Spotted a few mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed. I noticed that the details are important in the build of the plot, and I like that. I think it has a big potential and I hope that the author will finish the story. Great start and good flow of the events."
Codex Mortem
"This story was very intriguing. The way it is developing has me pulled in and wanting more. There was a couple of grammatical errors which is not bad when editing your own stuff. The only other thing was the speaking. It was a little confusing at first since I am so used to quotations but once I figured it out, it made sense. However, I feel quotations would be best used when having characters speak so there would not be anymore confusion. Other than those couple of things, I really enjoyed the story! Can't wait for more!"
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Different
"Not the typical werewolf story. The details are connected and full of meaning, developing a story beyond the story. The connections are easy to miss, but once you spot them, they add heaviness to the plot. Different style, very good plot!"
Higly Recommended
"The story is well witten. I really like the introduction. Characters male and female strong in their own way. Enjoyable. "
CODEX MORTEM
"well I actually loved the book but I really though that some sentences could be made more effective. Though not problem. It wasn't expected for me to read fantasy books as I am not really into it but the prologue go me interested and caught me up and to say the truth I really loved the way the poet has written this story. Would edit it once completed and would look forward to more chapters.^_^"
Potential
"Story structure is good a lot of potential, because it's not only different but has a nice flow. But I still find it confusing. I know sounds contradicting, but that's because how the dialogue flows. Its kind of hard to know who is speaking. Would suggest a different approach. Saw minor mistakes here and their Also would advice to use something for proofreading, it will help. I like it because it's a supernatural story. being a writer of supernatural totally understand the meaning and excitement of writing in a hurry, but i've learned to take it slow. so I advice you to do a small recheck on it. Overall it has potential, it captures you since the first chapter so keep up the good job!"
