What is your opinion?
The Last
"Great story. Looking forward to the next book"
LOVED IT!
"Amira going full violet-eyed power mode to save her village and caldwin stepping in like not on my watch? I’m obsessed."
Lovely story
"Lovely story. "
The Last
"I enjoyed the world-building and the plot. The characters and the dynamics between them were interesting and entertaining to read. The authors writing style was interesting and the plot is wonderful. It's been a while since I read anything with star crossed lovers. The paragraphs could be a bit shorter and I noticed a few technical errors but aside from these it was a great story which I enjoyed!"
The Lasg Dragon
"Great story line, very readable and easy to follow. Grammer mainly correct and written in the correct tense. Enjoying the story."
WOW
"Honestly, I loved it, your style of writing is special and you have a way with words. Can’t wait to read more!💕"
Love it
"Very good read so far"
The Last
"A solid introduction to the characters, the plot is good as well. You have an amazing way with words. I love it"
Very Good
"Very good job here. The first chapter was an awesome start. A solid intro to the characters and the plot, but leaving more than a little mystery, and full of action that was really well told and beautifully described. Personally I’m a characters kind of guy. I think if an author can figure out the characters they can create good work, and that is what you have done. The main character is great, but I find myself to really enjoy Rue. He’s awesome. Witty, sarcastic, and almost flirtatious in an evil way. What’s not to like. Great job. Keep writing."
Great job!
"I love fantasy so I know I’m going to enjoy how this book turns out. Somethings I found to be confusing is that you write a lot, which is good, but I feel like it doesn’t go anywhere. Also try and give context for what’s going on. In chapter one it kinda started in chaos and I had no idea what was going on but I still immensely enjoyed it! I can’t wait to see the plot unravel"
Beautiful!
"There's only the first three chapters so far, but it's got so much potential. It's a bit like a cross between Romeo and Juliet and fantasy, and I love both those things so where can it go wrong? The author needs to make their paragraphs shorter so they're easier to read, but other than that great start! Keep up the great work! Sofia"
The last
"Really great story, am waiting for your next part of this series. 😊"
The last
"I love the way you have plotted the story and I love the storyline so far!"
The last
"You've done a very good job so far. The world-building is great and the dynamics between the characters well described and interesting. A few things could be improved (see my comments underneath the chapters for those) and you could improve grammar and punctuation by using an online editor. I'm looking forward to more updates!"
The Last
"I like the start of the story. The plot is good. But I am not able to follow it. Maybe it is because I usually don't read fantasy or some other problem. I also think at some parts it gets a bit slow too. I hope you will rectify the problem.Good luck."
The Last
"Unfortunately could not read through the entire book, it started well but l just found it to fall a little flat , l found the characters hard to connect to and felt that the story kind of floated after a while and had nowhere to go"
