What is your opinion?
I've just started reading this book, and it's very mind blowing! Hopefully, the next chapters would be interesting too. Can't wait to continue! Make sure to give my book a try too! 🤩
"I practically liked the way the scenes were created. Nothing in this book is way too dramatic nor too less dramatic. I really like the good way of turning out a really nice story to a wild imagination! "
Immature
"I love the flow of the story. The chemistry between the characters is amazing. I only have one problem, probably it's just my opinion but I think the story is to straight forward. A bit of a drama would not have hurt. Other than that every thing is perfect. Great Work!! "
I love this
"You got me hooked from the very first chapter. The way you write makes me feel like I’m right there, and I can envision everything so perfectly. The way the character interact with each other also feels so real. I love this book and I cannot wait to continue reading. "
Immature
"WOW...Just wow. Started reading the book today and I'm already hooked and need more cause this story is incredible. I like how Chanti talks, the way she uses her words and never sugarcoats things. Her professional side was great but I really love how she began to be open and responsive to Garry's flirtatious gestures and all. Like how they are both honest with each other no matter the situation and the understanding and chemistry they have is great. I've never sob-smiled before but this story is chill. Love it."
immature
"I've only read the first chapter and to be honest I'm hooked...I love your style it's authentic . I felt like I was there with Serenity. Really captivating stuff you've got there."
Immature
"So I have only read three chapters so maybe I don't have enough to judge by but so far, I don't really get the title. Other than that, I love the story. It's a simple sweet romance packed with powerful descriptions and relatable conversations. The grammar was technically correct but the paragraphs tended to lack flow. Overall an amazing story. Kudos!"
chapt. 1 & 2
"I really enjoyed the first two chapters., it really makes you interested in the two main characters and how their relationship will continue. You have a nice clear way of writing, so it makes it easy to envision what your character(s) are doing and where the scene is played out. Keep on going like this."
Falling in love again!
"From the very first chapter the author has this smooth and hilarious banter going on between the two main characters of this book! This book makes me believe that there is a Gary out there in the world, which I really hope. He has this charm and cuteness described in the book that makes me fall head over heels with him. Chanti omg she is great I love her witty comebacks and fiery personality, I can always appreciate a strong female protagonist! Anyways I greatly enjoy this book a lot and I hope to see its success in the future!😄😄"
An uncommon romane--we NEED this
"This is a love story between an older man and a sassy young woman who just happens to be "differently-abled." And the fact that the plot is not centered around the latter is the first clue that this author has done something very difficult, very well. The protagonist is a "strong female lead" who knows what she wants and needs and isn't afraid to ask for it. And the playful banter, which intensifies as the chemistry builds, just proves that "Mr. Comb Over" has met his match! She's more than worth that $1000 tip. The author's warm and witty wordplay feels absolutely "real." I'm going to love getting to know this couple!"
Super cute and unconventional!!
"I really like how this isn't a run of the mill rom com. Its diffrent and I really appreciate the style of your writing as well. There are a few grammer mistakes but im assuming this is rough draft so its okay and can always be fixed later. Keep writing !"
Great start
"The name the cover of the book goes hand-in-hand. Cover is the first thing the readers look at and you have covered it well. I found it somewhat unique but it is hard to judge the plot because it is in its early stages. But the way you introduced the characters is really good and I think the plot is going to be great. I like how she tries to be professional. The couple at the start was sweet. Keep writing! It's gonna be great. "
Immature - great start
"Although there is only the first chapter I enjoyed it and it gave a good introduction to the characters. I like the fact it isn’t your ‘usual’ romance and look forward to getting to know the main character and how she progresses as the story goes on. The writing is descriptive and flows well. I got a real feel for the characters. Like the couple she serves regularly, I took a real liking to them and the characters came to life as I was reading. There are some minor grammar errors which a read over would fix - a couple of unclosed lines of speech and at one point she ‘walks’ over to Gary. Nothing that distracted me from the story itself though. Overall a great start, I was looking for the next chapter and gutted when it only had the one, ha! I hope you continue with the story and I will keep a look out for further chapters being uploaded. "
