What is your opinion?
A must read
"Interesting plot I really liked the twists and turns Great characters . Only thing that I felt was that perhaps the writing style lacked was a little maturity It’s amazing and perfectly crafted but just a hint of that element can make it truly perfect Best of luck "
Pleasantly surprised.
"So far from what I can tell of this book, it's immensely entertaining and keeps you on your toes. I love that there are cliffhangers around every corner. Definitely an author to keep your eye out for. Perfect story. "
Great story
"Great story I loved it, great job 👍🙂"
The Haunting Daunt
"I am impressed. The story was lovely and it got this scare that just keeps you in suspense...lovely! I have made a few comments that might help. Overall, it was a good story base on its fiction type."
The Haunting Daunt
"The start of the story itself is very scary. The plot of the story is a very smart from the beginning itself. Using a place like an apartment is a great place to start a horror move. Simply, the perfect story for any horror novel lovers, I just loved the story. I kept reading on and on the story until the lastest chapter. Waiting for more ; ] -Sanu-"
The Haunting Daunt
"I enjoyed the story. A comical and haunting tale with suspense and scares woven into it. I liked the characters and the vivid descriptions as well as the vivid imagery painted with the scenes. If there was anything I had issues with it was the formatting, but otherwise, it was a wonderful story. No grammar and spelling mistakes. Great job to the author!!"
Chapter 3 Bloody Faith 😳🥴
"I sure enjoyed this book, I love a great horror and this was it."
Scary.
"So, I’m not so into horror but this gave me more hope on to reading. The plot is outstanding, grammar on point and even the editing is beautiful. The only problem is that the book has huge paragraphs instead of small ones. This can create confusions amongst readers. But overall great book. P.S for author I’ve read around half of it before, I just didn’t get time to review it. Sorry for the late review but kudos for you!"
Review
"The plot is intriguing plus it's age-appropriate that's something for me to focus on. The plot is well explained and horror parts are written professionally also you showed the story instead of telling and it seemed like I am watching a movie. Hats off to the author. May you win this competition. Inshallah Thanks"
The Haunting Daunt
"It was a fairly enjoyable book. It had suspense and some good scares, a good plot, too. Everything about it was great and as far as technical skills... They are amazing: accurate spelling, proper grammar, correct punctuation.. Just outstanding. Kudos to the author for that and the enjoyable book! Definitely a book to recommend to horror lovers! "
The haunting daunt
"OMG!!!! I love horror books...and wow what a nice way You have plotted everything and executed it!! I really liked it a lot!! Waiting for more books from you!!! Thank you! _nightrider"
The Demon
"Chapter 5 the demon gives me thrill and excitement though horror story is not my cup of tea but your story makes me scared. I love your plot. It gives me shiver and goosebumps. I like the way you write and plot your story. It's like really hitting my imagination. Keep it up and God bless. Can you please visit mine too. hope I could get your reviews, comments, and like if possible. Thank you. xoxo Aphrodite 💕"
An Amazingly Suspenseful and Engaging Story
"I really enjoyed this story. It has all the elements of being a commercial and critical success. The writing makes you want to read more and is very descriptive. I really feel that the author should write more books. I like the subject of a (SPOILER ALERT!!!) haunted apartment. What has been written is already complete and I hope to see this book on bookshelves and all other writing and literature outlets."
Awesome Plot and Storyline
"This book is so awesome. I personally love horror stories, but this one is a true combo, It is a Horror/Mystery/Thriller. So, if you are not a big horror fan, you can enjoy it's Mystery and Thriller Genre. Amazing!"
Best horror writing style ever!
"Wow... Like, WOW! I'm thrilled by the way you described everything so neatly. I really suggest you to mostly write horror stories because they're really well written here. Good luck! :)"
Thrilling
"I love horror stories and to be honest this is the first horror story I'm reading after a long long long time. In all, the story is really good"
Really cool
"I don't usually go in for stories like this, but I really liked what you wrote! I don't like to give spoilers, so I'll just say this, you did a great job building intrigue and you really made it feel like I was there. 9/10 would read again!"
Surprisingly good
"I honestly didn't think this story would be that intriguing, but it was. There are so many things I liked about it, the way you set it up, the plot, the characters--all that was amazing. Just a few issues with punctuation and grammar. You need to separate your paragraphs so it doesn't feel as long and rushed; dialogue should also be separated with paragraphs so you can tell which person is speaking :) Other than that it was enjoyable and well done!"
Not bad.
"Not bad, but could use some work. You need to separate your paragraphs more and maybe use a grammar checker. Grammar issues aside, not a bad story. It feels a little rushed and I think it would help to go back and rewrite a few things, but the story really does have potential. Keep writing!"
Great
"It's the first horror story that I read and it was worth the try. It was an amazing horror story and the thrill and the suspense it brought with it is what I liked the most. The story lacked some important things but professionalism can't be expected from the first time so it's understandable. What attracted me the most was the writing style of the author with the curiosity he tried to build in the reader to know further. Overall, the story was good and I appreciate the efforts of the writer."
