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Great plot

"Amazing job! I love the plot and how you depicted your characters I can't wait for the rest There are some grammatical mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed Overall very good job with this, I really enjoyed it"

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Renovating

"Very interesting book. I love it already "

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Review

"I really enjoyed the story. Love the way it unfolds. Like the characters and I am intrigued by them. Nice work!!"

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Power and duty

"The story flows easily and is very easy to understand. The description of the main characters are well written. The characters are very different,so it will be interesting to see how they connect. It's just the beginning so I have lots of questions right now. But I guess I have to wait till the next update. Great work!! "

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Realist futurist world!

"Im really intrigued by the main characters. Their lifes are very different and while i dont see how they entertwine just yet, im anticipating something really unique that is beffitting of your unique story! The writing is well done and creative!"

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Extremely well written

"Overall I tremendously enjoyed the start of this story. The characters were written in a way that is easy to follow and easy to get into their minds. The story also leaves you with many different questions in a way that really captures your attention. I noticed one or two grammer errors but other than that it was perfect. Huge congratulations to the author for such a strong and intriguing plot! Keep writing! I can't wait for more "

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