What is your opinion?
Fantastic
"I am never a fan of military stories, but this one is fantastic. The fantasy that comes with it. The suspense, and twist of events, excite me the most. It had left me wanting more. I am in love with Marie and Venessa's characters. One is patient and the other is not so patient. I guess the opposite attracts. Anyway. Good job. "
Very Imaginative
"I liked the imagination and creativity in this book. The characters were diverse in their personalities, and the dialogue was believable. There were some grammar and spelling issues, but it's a good book all around. There were some pleasant twists I didn't expect, especially at the end. This was a fun read overall, and I'd recommend it to any fantasy reader."
Silent Storm
"The author has put together a very comprehensive read. It is well-written, vivid with painstaking clarity. The words and events flow wonderfully. I enjoyed the storytelling method too. Well done and best wishes - shobana"
Great
"So reading the story there were ups and downs. For instance, I liked it. But there is a thing called too much drama. Now don't get me wrong I write stories here too and I know that having drama to a story especially a whole string of drama can captivate and hook the reader to continue reading. Now this story does that. It keeps you wanting to read more and find the bottom of this whole cobweb of drama. But with that said I felt it was a tad bit of a hair too much. Either way, I give this story ten out of ten. Like no mistakes in grammar and spelling that I saw from a first glance. The plot was nicely paced and the author's writing style was easy to understand and full of emotion. I loved it."
Unnaturally Promising
"Although it isn't finished, the author's story is quite captivating. The flow from scene to scene is smooth. Well written when it comes to magic and religion being mixed together."
Great storyline and characters so far
"Can't wait for the next chapters! "
Great read bit confusing keeping up but i liked it
"I want more! "
Silent Storm
"It’s a good story; but, feels incomplete. Is a sequel in the works?"
PRETTY AWSOME
"I personally read a ton and this one just left me wanting for more. Despite starting the book couple of weeks ago, I have already read it about 5 to 6 times. There were parts that weren't exactly the way I prefer. But what is a book without such things?"
Silent Storm
"This book was good, and I did enjoy it. The world building was interesting, and I certainly was not bored, even though I've seen some call it a slow start. However, there are a few constant punctuation mistakes that I noticed, but those mostly consisted of minor comma placement (and lack thereof). Rushed appearance share was also a factor, though it wasn't too bad; personally, I just felt it could be a bit more gradual, but that's just me. Other than that, this book felt like a refreshing break from hardcore fantasy, and I like that a lot. Overall, great job."
A Brilliant Story About to Unfold...
"While it is hard to review something that only has 2 chapters, I have to say that what I have read so far, is captivating! I'm only just beginning to start liking the characters, but to discuss them in length won't do any justice for the author, as there is no material left to further my voice. What I can say is that the chapters are somewhat lengthy. Maybe try shortening them? Just a suggestion. The Summary is BREATHTAKING, and I would follow this story from here on out. As I said, this is a story to behold. I truly hope this will be finished, as I can see a masterpiece on the horizon!"
