What is your opinion?
This is a good story,i loved the characters and how they interacted with each other,every chapter is a beautiful journey and it leaves me wanting more,the main characters have different personalities and i love that.Her grammar is okay with me i can read and understand the story
"I love everything about this book and i think those who love magical journeys should read the story"
Red Moon Rising
"There exists good writing and artistic writing - this story is the latter. It is imaginative with a depth that not only lies within the story but raises questions of time and purpose lost."
Solid start
"I think I share the opinions of the some of the other reviews that the grammar needs a little touching up. However, I can say that I did enjoy reading this story, even though I am not huge into romantic stuff. My favorite scene was the shopping scene with Ravana and Malvi. It was rather fun! Ravana is also the most entertaining character in the story, continued development of her would be a good direction for the conclusion of the story."
Red Moon Rising
"This story promises an amazing adventure. I can tell the author put their heart and soul into developing the characters and the world they’re in. That makes such a huge affect when reading an exciting story such as this. I really love the male protagonist Draven! And I can’t wait to see what’s in store for these characters. There are a few instances with grammar where there are words missing from a phrase or incorrectly used but nothing major that would take away from the story. It could just use a good read through! Overall I recommend this story to anyone who is wanting an exciting read! "
Red Moon Rising.
"I liked the book as far as it has been written. Mistakes that I could ignore so the grammar wasn't a problem. The story is original and creative. I loved reading the story and I can't wait to read more. every chapter keeps you wanting to read more. Some of the best cliffhangers that I have seen."
RED MOON RISING
"Oooh the novel is fantastic!!! I enjoyed myself so much. I lost myself in the novel, kinda made me feel like part of it. But that's what a good writer should be. Make the reader feel part of the world of the book they're reading. Keep up the good work!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter."
Review
"We decided to read only two chapters for the review swap. But I will continue to read it because it's a great story. The way it is written, the plot has a great grip. Looking forward to read more. "
Wow
"The start of this book is strong. I would describe it as a page-turner. Each chapter ends with a hook that makes you wonder what will happen next."
Perfect !
"Interesting story, nice writing style:) looking forward for the new chapters:)"
Very original!
"Great story! Very original plot lines. Draven is quite fantastic, his humor throughout everything made the story so much fun. The first few chapters promise a lot of adventure, but no romance yet. The characters were great, but I would like a little more back story to feel fully connected to the characters. There are minor grammatical errors throughout the story, but nothing distracts you from the story. Highly recommend this story! You won't be disappointed by the adventure and humor."
Nice Start
"It looks like a promising start but I would suggest going over the grammar once again so its perfect, I also would recommend using italic font for the thoughts since it makes it easier to read"
