Chapter Chapter 2 | The Bloody Mystery by Ghazal at Inkitt
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The bloody mystery

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Summary

Hating her life, led to a big argument with her sister while looking for her, she has been locked up and the last person to live but then she discover's something that will haunt her forever

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
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Age Rating
13+

Chapter 2

Today was the day of prom and she was excited she dresses up in the presses dress ever. when the day was over she was so excited to tell her sister

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, I came home running to my sister to explain the big situation of what I got myself in. I went straight to the kitchen to where she was. I needed to tell her what happened! You would not believe what I just saw coming back from school! I yelled so she could hear me loud and clear. My dog the lazy irksome always starts to bark because I was so loud, a few minutes later one of my neighbors threw a rock out of that window to make the dog shut up. That dumb dog, I don't even know what my dad even got him … ughh, I winde. As my sister sat down on the stull and looked at me like I was a monkey who just didn’t care about life. I mean I was. I rolled my eyes and then looked back at her and of course, she had to say something, she said so what happened that was soo important that you intranpend me while I was doing an amazing job. She really thought she could cook. She made fish with cupcake frosting once like no sister eww. I turned back and I said in a humiliating voice shouldn't you be in the playground with your other hunting rainbow monster friends. Well, she looked shocked. She grind at me and stood up and said mom wouldn't like it if she heard this recording of you saying this. Would she. I stared at her phone in silence. She wouldn’t dare. she laughed the evil laugh she always laughed since we were little. I knew I had to do something if my mom found out I would die and she would be laughed at every hit she hit me. All I could feel right now is mom’s face when she starts to yell at me. I ran upstairs packed my things and took my phone. I ran out of the house. The only place I could go is the skeleton’s trail. I went quickly outside and went inside the car I could hear my sister screaming. I turned the car on and looked around to see if I could find anything. The only things I found is a book, a doll that looked like my ELA middle school teacher, and a pen. (the pen is magical but the character does not know that until the end) Great, I thought. I started the car and hoped none would follow me like my sister did. I drove for a few hours. And then it started to get a little bit foggy I couldn't see where I was going. I was very far away from home, I decided to stop and take a break. 2 hours have passed by, I did feel a bit hungry tho. Then I got a phone call from mystery? I wonder who that would be, as I picked up the phone I could hear soft screaming. Hello?

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