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This is a great unique story

"I haven't finnished reading this book but I'm loving every chapter"

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Helping others

"When I read the premise I liked it but I was curious how the writer would make it work but it is a good story and captivating. "

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Helping Other's

"I enjoyed this book very much. Each chapter pulls you in and keeps you wanting more. A must-read for sure!"

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Lovely

"Good book this far. I love the book this far"

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Helping others

"Good book so far"

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Great read!

"Love the plot and the main characters, definitely captivates your attention from the get go. Great job and can’t wait to continue reading to see what happens!!"

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Helping Others

"Good Job! Well plotted! Your story is very engaging and I am left wanting more! Some things to work on is better Punctuation and Grammar. You can try Grammarly. It really helps me when I'm writing. I hope it does the same for you!"

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Definitely Recommend

"The plot is so unique and you managed to captivate me from the first chapter. You're missing a few comas and full stops here and there and sometimes I can't quite tell when the MC is talking bc of the lack of ' " ' (except if that's intentional). Apart from that, it's a really enjoyable read! "

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Helping others

"It is a good story it is well captivating but the things in it are also unique. Lovely that someone so young can become that and be so good. Being a helpful person with two jobs as a waitress and as an angel is very unique.. It is questionable these days what the young find to work on and this is a job anyone can aspire to. It is a good story without much effort but a good story that is told well. Taken with a pinch of salt."

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Helping Other’s

"This story has captivated me from the first chapter and now I'm left wanting more... I love how you reeled me in. Good job x"

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Helping others

"Great Job Author in captivating your readers. You have given us emotion which is very important when telling a story. Excellent job on capturing this from the very beginning. I love the plot so far. And what a world between fantasy and reality. You have a fantastic story here, and I can not wait to read more of this journey you are taking us on. "

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Give this book a chance

"If you like fantasy give this book a chance. This book is exactly what the cover page shows. A sweet fantasy story involving a 15-year-old girl who is tasked to help people. I think the task suits her well. It will evoke emotions as she does her duty of saving people and helping others. The book is well written for sure. I cannot wait to see how the story goes down."

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Amazing...

"It's a fantastic and great fairy tale......👍👍👍 that captivates you from the first chapter... I highly recommend reading it..👍"

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Holy moly

"Oh my. What a ride. First off.. Brilliant book cover. Really draws you in. Wasn't sure what to expect going in but I do not regret reading. Tbh. My eyes teared up at the emotional beginning only to feel like I entered the Matrix further on. This story will keep you on your toes. Way to go author. Can't wait to read more. "

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love it

"i enjoy this story the emotion you use are turky touching, i love as i was almost in tears of how the characters were feeling in the story i also loved your writing style."

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Intriguing!

"I was going to read the first few chapters for a review swap, but the concept of the book had me hooked and now I need to know what happens. So please finish the book. There maybe a few technical issues with grammar and punctuation, but simple editing can take care of those easily. The plot is highly intriguing, and I love the way it started. The questions in your mind propelled you to continue reading until you found the answers to them. Keep up the good work."

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Amazing

"Lovely read"

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Supper

"Your story is enthralling, captivating, and also lesson-filled. I couldn't read to the end for now, but well sure your story-line is good, and the way you play with words is stunning and fascinating. I have enjoyed reading your story as keep me flipping and turning the pages due to much suspense. I must say, its a great piece."

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Fire

"😎👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥"

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Fantastic book

"Love the characters and the plot😊 I really can't wait to read more✌️✌️"

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