WNNoxer

I’m a Dutch mom, finally having the guts to put my imagination on paper, well at least on screen. I hope you will like it!

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Sweet story

It is a very nice and sweet story, that will probably appeal to girls with a romantic nature.
As for the plot, is clear and straightforward, no twists and turns. I would recommend to do this in another story, it will keep the reader more interested. Just like the main characters, they appear to have no flaws, which gives the feeling of fairytale figures, to good to be true.
The writing styles makes reading easy, it’s nice and fluid.

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chapt. 1 & 2

I really enjoyed the first two chapters., it really makes you interested in the two main characters and how their relationship will continue. You have a nice clear way of writing, so it makes it easy to envision what your character(s) are doing and where the scene is played out. Keep on going like this.

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