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The Spark (Teaser)

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Summary

This story will not be for the faint of heart and will contain a lot of depictions of gore and horror, please be advised. This is also my first major work so please don't be hard on it, I'm only 17 and don't have a lot of time to write. But any tips are welcome

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

Teaser

Leaning against the remains of what was once a building, now consumed by fleshy flowers and a number of foreign bugs I knew that my story didn't have much more to go, but I must push on, I'm oh so close to my goal. I used my rifle to pull myself off the ground and begin moving again, using it as a makeshift walking stick.

Using my last flare as a shield to keep the creatures off of me I dreaded the moment it went out, at least I'd be able to take them with me, if I get that chance that is.

(Meet Elijah, known as "The Spark", his job is to sever the connection between his planet and a parasite that controls it so that they can get help from outside factions, this story will be dark, gorey and a quite voilent

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