What is your opinion?
A Marvelous Woman Like Lilly Louise
"Not only is Lilly marvelous, but Smith is as well! One can't help but smile while reading this heartwarming tale. Smith captures the essence of true love in her sweet sentiment and delicate prose. My only suggestion...give us more! I want to know more about this passionate couple you've created!"
Good Book
"I have to say, this book is excellent. If you enjoy reading romance and fantasy, this book is definitely for you! I loved this book and would recommend it to everyone. -Ellie"
Lovely short story
"A beautiful story of the love between a man and woman. Very gentle and romantic. Great read :-)"
A Marvelous Woman Like Lilly Louise
"Excellent story! I don't want to give away any spoilers, so I won't! However, if you love passion, drama, and romance, this tale has it all and then some. Once you start, you won't put it down."
Lily Louise and Jeffrey
"Jeffrey's love for Lily is so beautiful and inspiring. The beautiful poem describes the various phases of a couple's life, but even with the fights and differences they overcome everything by love. It's inspiring! Congrats!!"
A collection of warm little stories
"A collection of various warm episodes,more like a diary than a story. The language is beautiful,my only suggestion is to create more connections among those episodes and maybe create some conflicts will be more interesting~"
Great job !
"I really enjoyed reading this, your style is very distinguished ! i wish i can write as good as u do !"
Nice fee-good read!
"I enjoyed reading your story about Jeffery and Lilly Louise. Your writing style conjured nice images in my mind - you can craft a picture with your prose! The only thing I would say is that there was no conflict involved in the short story - injecting some might spice it up. But overall, I really liked it!"
Excellent
"There was something so light and soft about this story. Beautiful writing. The only things I'd say for improving would be to proofread through again and fix some mistakes that made a couple sentences a bit confusing. Also, I'd recommend replacing the word "beautiful" a few times with something more specific or an analogy of sorts. Overall, the writing brought wonderful and sweet images into my head and kept me intrigued"
A Marvelous Woman like Lily Louise
"Everything about this story screams princess fairy-tale. The phrasing used to describe the actions, the scenes, the conversations... Pretty much everything is adorable, I saw some grammatical errors here and there along the occasional drop in the writing style, and I would really like to see a lot more plot development and a little more action overall but otherwise, a good read."
