The Lay of Kangkex
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The Lay of Kangkex

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Story Notes

This idea originated while I was studying World History as a Junior in high school, some 50 years ago. It is actually song lyric, which is why there are notations of time signature in the lyric. The artwork was developed with AI.

Summary

Kangkex is an Egyptian warrior in the service of Pharoah Darius the Third. As a warrior of great renown, he is allowed to have his wife accompany him in the camp. They know they will soon face Alexander the Great. And they have captured a scout who knows Alexander's plan. He was injured while being captured. They allow him to rest for the night before he is interrogated. He breaks a lamp and uses a shard to cut his bonds. As he tries to escape from the camp, he strays into the tent of Kangkex where Natiri is waiting for the warrior to return. She screams, and the scout kills her. Kangkex returns moments later. And in a fit of rage, he kills the scout. This is a capital crime, and despite his renown he is put to death. He finds himself in the Hall of the 42 Judges in the Palace of Osiris. His heart is weighed against a feather. He is found to be just. But the god of the underworld won't overlook the fact that he cost his master the war. He is sentenced to face the Eater of the Dead. Because he passed the test of the scales, he is armed with a pair of short swords. If he can get by the Eater, he will enter a maze. And if he can possibly win his way through, he can yet rejoin Natiri in the Egyptian heaven, the Fields of Contentment.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

An Epic Poem

(Guide Theme in 4/4)

Many great deeds have you done, my son

Many great deeds have you done

Many campaigns by your hands were won

Many great deeds have you done

But orders were given, as well you knew

Thus did you forfeit your life

Ruled by your wrath you the prisoner slew

after he murdered your wife

Still to be questioned, he’d freed himself

using the shards of a lamp

Using the moonlight to lead himself

he sought to flee from the camp

Into your tent went his wandering route

Natiri screamed her last breath

Hearing her you, Kangkex, killed the scout

Thus were you sentenced to death

(Egyptian Theme in 7/8)

Darius the third was king

in Mesopotamia

He did not fear anything

but the king of Macedonia

Alexander’s reach had grown

Marching southward still he came

threatening the Persian’s throne

and his rule of Egypt just the same

His vast forces, some on horses,

he sent forth to the north

There they chanced upon a scout

who knew Alexander’s plan

Thus his army they might route

so they started questioning the man

He was wounded in the fight

when at first they’d captured him

So they left him for the night

as the light of day began to dim

Kangkex caught him and he fought him,

sealed his fate by his hate

(Horseman theme 4/4)

Beyond death Kangkex awoke

and the world rolled away like so much smoke

and he found himself in the judgment hall

in the palace of Osiris, his deeds upon papyrus

(7/8)

Kangkex stood before the judges in their hallowed hall

Being of Egyptian birth he knew them one and all

His heart was placed on their scale, a feather lay on the other side

He knew those magistrates very soon would his final fate decide

The scale revealed his heart was true; he thought he was in the clear

The Fields of Contentment therefore waited and the one he held dear

But then the god Osiris spoke and this is what he said,

“Your deeds have damned you and you must face the Eater of the Dead.

“You killed the scout and he knew the route that Alexander would take

You cost your master the war and you must compensation make

Because you faced the Scales and won, these short swords you may take

To your beloved, Natiri, you may yet a passage make.”

Kangkex entered the lair where he would face the ultimate foe

There was a maze on the other side, the only place he could go

But he would have to use his short swords to climb a vertical wall

The maze held horrors and he would have to face them one and all

Kangkex swung his swords with all his might,

Waging war on the Beast of Night

It was immortal, so it couldn’t die

Around it he needed to get by

His short swords gave it a big surprise

But it refused to be robbed of its prize

By fancy footwork he’d learned to do,

the swordsman won his way through

He maneuvered his way to the wall

From its purchase he dared not fall

With his short swords he climbed up its face

Barely did he just win that race

The creature swiped at his climbing feet

but could not reach him in his swift retreat

He reached the ledge and then disappeared

into the maze that he feared

The darkness surrounded, robbed him of sight

His eyes were confounded to face his fright

He heard the coming of fearsome wings

It chilled him to the core of his being

He had to silence his primal fears

and find the creature with just his ears

He swung his swords at the flapping sound

His weapons somehow their target found

But more such monsters flew to the fight

He had to disavow all his fright

His foes were hovering at arm’s length

and quickly sapping him of his strength

But through attrition their numbers fell

as he confronted the Wings of Hell

Kangkex was not overcome,

not even by the monsters’ sum

He met their challenge through his travail

And ultimately he did prevail

♫

(4/4)

But soon he found

his way no longer went on solid ground

It went below

with water the only way he could go

The tunnel dove

Against now an airless passage he strove

So he took a deep breath

and hoped that this wasn’t death

A strange weak light

came out from the walls and broke up the night

allowing him to see

the tunnel abruptly split into three

If he chose wrong

he knew it would be the end of his song

But he’d not be denied

and would not turn aside

(7/8)

Coming up through the surface

he could see a faraway light

Gratefully he took in a breath

He clearly had chosen right

He kept the points of his short swords

up against each opposite wall

The sound they made suddenly changed

and kept him from taking a fall

Striking out with the sword tips

he was able to make some sparks

Using their meager light gave him

a way to peer through the dark

A yawning chasm stretched out before him

fully blocking his path

And he was weighted down by his swords

and soaked from taking a bath

One of his swords he tossed onto

the other side of the pit

The other he dropped into the chasm

hoping to fathom it

If he fell in but survived the fall

a weapon he just might need

But hoping to cross that gaping gulf

he sure was missing his steed

No sound of the short sword striking bottom

ever did reach his ears

It left him bemoaning his decision,

magnifying his fears

(7/8)

With a running start Kangkex did leap,

springing over the chasm deep,

landing lightly on the other side

Soon now he would rejoin his bride

The time for violence was now quite past

He walked around the short sword he had cast

And as he stepped out into the light

Natiri greeted his sight


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