What is your opinion?
Good review
"Really enjoy reading this book so far so good there are a few spelling errors and words missing Jeremy and there but other than that I liveth boom"
The Pack And The Queen
"This story is definitely unique! There were few grammar issues but it was easy to follow and read I loved your writing style, everything was so descriptive! My favourite character up to now, is Sam... he's so sweet and cuddly. Ethan and Sam definitely balance each other out, it's the best of both worlds 😍 I will definitely be continuing to read x"
Thumbs up!! Loved it!
"Chapters have few grammatical errors but nothing major, but the story as plot and all is just amazing and intriguing, makes you just want to find out what is going to happen next, definitely keep up wonderful work and updating as now I need to see more ❤"
Inetresting
"The story is very unique i am a fan of werewolves so i know a lot about them but ive never come across something like this so i believe its original. I really love where the story is going and it shows a lot of potential to become something big. The story is very good However you must revisit your chapters and correct the grammar. Have you tried using grammarly try it. I love it❤️❤️❤️❤️"
The Pack and the Queen
"So far so good. Can't wait to see what happens next. It'll be interesting to see how it the police can work with the pack and vice versa. Keep up the good work."
Absolutely exhilarating!!
"The raw mixture of sensuality and horror is beautifully evened out. Currently separated, I’m extremely for the next chapter where I’m sure the author is planning a collision of the two. I can’t wait to see how this story plays out as it continues to develop. The authors writing style is impeccable to match her truly original story concepts. I really hope this book gets another update here soon!"
The Pack and The Queen
"I think that this book is very well written and I love it! This is such an interesting book. I would recommend it to people who like wolves and vampires."
Interesting
"WOOOW! I am at a loss for words to describe this story....the auther has opened it up for so many possibilities of drama and passion. The deep love the three mates have for one another and the aspect of the extra need for blood show that these individuals will be seeing one another at some point.... excited to read more."
Must Read
"The story was written beautifully and well-paced. I'm enjoying the plot so far which hooks you from the start and was binging on the current chapters. The characters are well-developed and balanced out nicely, especially in their circumstances and you soon decide on your favorites. I would suggest is try 'show not tell' more when you write. Everyone battles with it at times, myself included. I look forward to the next chapter."
Intriguing
"The story from what I’ve read so far is quite intriguing. It definitely keeps you captured in the plot. It is more on the erotic side, but not overpowering. Great story."
Love it!
"I’m in love with this story! It’s beautifully written and I love that it’s different."
It’s a great book so far
"I really like the contrast between characters and I really like the writing style. "
Review
"I think the story you're telling is interesting. I like the fact werewolves and these vampires are already known to humans. The characters are well written. There are a few grammatical mistakes and issues with sentence structure, but those are easily fixable! Loving it so far!"
Overall, amazing, but...
"You have a very compelling and gripping start to the story. I love the dark, ominous sense you get straight from the start. The plot seems solid and well thought out and with a seemingly good flow to it. It's not too rushed, but it's not lagging either. You gain the reader's interest instantly in the first chapter and you maintain it well in the following chapters. However, it does need some work to make it REALLY amazing. Grammar and sentence flow was my biggest drawbacks in reading the initial chapters. Some of the sentences were far too long with unneeded detail which made them seem a little daunting to ingest. With that said, take a little time to really focus on the Grammar, flow, and overall structure and I think you've got something that could be an epic hit! I'm really looking forward to seeing this book, and your writing develop! Keep at it, and I wish you all the best of luck <3"
Great!
"Werewolf stories generally aren’t my thing, but I loved yours right from the start! I think Sam is my favourite, but all the characters are distinct and unique, a challenging feat to pull off so nice job with that!! My one piece of advice with your grammar is to watch your tenses; you write in past tense, but a few times I noticed you switching into present tense. Just something to note for future edits. Your writing style flows very nicely and is descriptive without slowing the story down or anything. Overall I think you have something special here! Great job! :)"
Intriguing
"I haven’t read many chapters. So please don’t be mad. There are a few grammatical errors here and there. Some very noticeable and others not so much. Other than that it’s a very intriguing read. I’m very curious to see how it ends! Keep it up! Xx Belle💛🌻"
The pack and the queen.
"I liked the plot. It was a little hard for me to follow in some places. There were many redundant sentences especially when talking about how the boys treated Ray like a Queen. Overall I liked it so far. It definitely needs some fine tuning, but nice work so far. 😊"
Intense
"Wow. This was intense. The fight was awesome and you feel the aftermath. I enjoy this turn if events alt. Can't wait for what comes next . "
Four glorious stars
"You have a unique writing style. To start the book with a coupling that is already in the claiming process is surprisingly effective. I loved this route. The first chapter was a good contrast to the prologue and very action-driven. You don't really foreplay with the setting up of the scene rather you just approach it head-on. Four stars for the uniqueness of your style. "
Not bad at all.
"I’m a great fan of supernatural writing, and wolves just to top it off. The persona created does give way to much more intrigue, and the obedience in belonging to follow. I think it is a great start to a good journey. Best advise I could give is to just check some of your grammar, and sentence structuring. It has potential – keep writing. H"
