What is your opinion?
Highly emotional
"From the little I've read, I can tell this will be a heart-wrenching, emotional roller coaster. It's likely to be a novel that lets us look at life differently and be grateful for what we have for as long as we have it. The emotions, descriptions, and characters are believable and executed very well. It's a novel I'm willing to follow, and I'm definitely interested to see what the author has in store for us down the road. -Author of Hollow's Charge"
Wonderful
"Beautifully described, Was hooked from the first paragraph Try not use repetitive describing words Incredible i totally love it Definitely worth a read "
Secret Blood
"I love the way you chose to look into the guilt of having the illness and how it affects her instead of just moving on from it right away. Though technical errors are sometimes there, like issues with some grammar that doesn't harm the understanding. Your description of what is going on and your ability to show and not just tell what is going on is great and I feel like it shows how this girl had been by herself a majority of her life, at least my guess from it. It is well written and has great potential, can't wait for more!"
Review
"This one had made me feel all the emotions, and it only has two chapters up. The authors writing is excellent, and has conveyed the tone really well. Very excited to see where it goes, pls don't keep me guessing!"
I need more
"It is rare I find books that capture my interest in just one chapter, typically I need to read 2-3 to get a real feel of whether a book will be worth my time reading. However, one chapter and the author has caught me like a fish taking the angler's bait! I cannot wait to read future chapters!"
Secret Blood
"So, there is only one chapter up, but this story is beautiful! It's well detailed and the descriptions are amazing! You can actually feel the emotions of the main character, which is also a bonus since it shows the writing skills of the author!! I cant wait to read more!! Keep up the good work!!❤❤"
Secret Blood
"I think this is probably the only story I have given all five stars and it isn’t even finished yet! I was pulled into this story so fast. Cannot wait to read more and I hope more is uploaded soon!"
Secret Blood
"Can I just say ‘WOW’? The opening was absolutely perfect and I am sure that the book will continue this way. I can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters. The description captivated it and it reached my heart. I hope you upload soon! Keep up the phenomenal work. "
Amazing Story!
"Amazing plot-line so far! Makes me want to read more. I’m looking forward to how this story will play out!"
Secret Blood is very interesting
"Very strong opening, it sucks you in and you can't help but feel the pain the lead feels. Instantly you want her to be better, Hopefully someone handsome can come along to take her mind away from this pain. Good job."
Fascinating!
"I loved your chapter; It's intriguing and honestly creeks my interest. To learn of whom; sounds utterly beautiful, yet sickeningly dreadful, drives me to want to learn more about Valerie. She seems so lost and broken; it truly saddens me to visualize her in such sorrows of which she may never know the answers of which haunt her, though I do hope it's something magical!"
Secret Blood
"An interesting story plot written with beautiful imagery. By the first chapter the reader is already captivated by the appealing writing style of the author. This book is amazing so far! I can't wait to read more."
I don't Know what To Say
"I honestly, don't know what to say i'm shocked and still busy crying, I am a little confused if you will keep updating it or not, any option i am fine with, Keep up the good work!"
An interesting read
"This novel definitely has an interesting plot that traps the reader's attention. We are left wondering about Valerie's mystery illness. I really like your descriptions and imagery. Your use of rhetorical questions also captivates the mind of the reader. Well done! However, there are some errors in grammar which you need to look out for. Overall, you have a very interesting book and I can't wait to read more."
Write More!
"It's very hard to leave a review on a story with only one chapter written, so my feelings of the work may change as you write more. I have to say that it's good so far! I really feel for the main character - she has a hell of a disease to battle with, by the sounds of it. It's also so refreshing to read a story on here with such polished grammar and lurid descriptions. I can't wait to see this story develop!"
