Chapter 1
~Isabella~
Darkness. All around me that’s all I saw. I felt my skin go cold and the chains burn as I was tied down to something hard. Possible a table. This happened every night in my dreams, well, nightmares. My eyes would go wide when I looked up to see a pare of burning blood-red staring down, hungrily and lustfully. Lastly, I would let out a scream that could destroy eardrums and wake up panting. Every, single, night...for several months...









Intriguing start, but I think it should say "possibly a table" and "pair of burning, blood-red eyes". (Feel free to delete my typo correcting comments afterwards btw.)
I think it's a great start. Im intrigued and can't wait to read the res
Oh :O