What is your opinion?
A wild ride!
"I love horror and in regards of that, this book is one to watch out for. The atmosphere the author creates is fantastic and sets up the tone throughout the book. The lingering mysteries surrounding the woods at first and why those shouldn't go wondering were met with answers, that I for one, did not fully guess lol. I will certainly have this book saved and wait for the additional chapters to be uploaded. BUT despite these fantastic points, there were hiccups in the story. Such as, sentence fragments, repeated wording, paragraph structure, etc. I will not list all of them as I left my notes to the author in the comments of some of his chapters. The only advice I would have from one author to another is expand your vocabulary and study story structure. There is never enough words to learn about and you want your book to be solid. Because you have a great premise, a wonderful set-up and a keen eye for the construction of horror telling. If you just learn how to fine tune your story and further learn descriptive words? You'll be a threat in horror writing! Continue on! Can't wait to see what else you can muster up."
Frightening haha
"This book is amazing :) and frightening at the same time haha The story overall .. I would rate brilliant .. everything grilled inside is amazing. The plot of the story is explained well .. one can make where they are and what the surrounding area looks like .. I liked the part where you explained the house .. it was intense to know they were hiding while the creature was stalking the night, seeking upon prey, where they never knew what happened .. until they find the mysterious diary :) The character development is well explained .. both human characters were shown instead of explained :) as for the creatures .. good job on them .. I'm not one much for this sort of thing, but I enjoyed the book thoroughly :) The story structure is well thought of, I know this takes a lot of work, especially something that comes from history, I remember you told me this is part of history .. but you did an excellent job :) The writing style .. I know you're still young and you're incredibly smart and matured .. but I feel this story can be mainly matured .. instead of explaining how they are handling their emotions .. rather explain in a few words what they are feeling .. the witch saw her legs off and her sensation is strong, pain, regret, lost .. she's experiencing these emotions and it's hard for her to comprehend what is happening around her .. her brother is experiencing .. regret, pain, and neither of them can take back what happened .. so .. he's looking at her, but through her .. the emotions his experiencing can be explained in a few words .. and also what they are doing is well thought off .. but can be explained in fewer words .. sometimes skipping a few words is fine .. but not change the whole plot :) ***he gawks at her .. what that witch did was uncalled for .. how could she have done such a thing? Sawing the legs of his sister? Her emotions boil inside .. his heart breaks with every peep she makes**** I don't know if this helps sweetie :) but something like this perhaps .. don't use my words thou .. just an example of the emotion expressed between them .. they are experiencing pain and loss.. regret is a main factor here sweetie :) and you use emotion .. you do .. just want to let you know what I mean you know :) Punctuation, Grammer .. I didn't really spot them .. I think I was reading in thought rather than looking for mistakes haha This story is potential, and a well thought of book :) I recommend this book for anyone who enjoys reading such genre :) As a friend :) please take this as a kind review :) I know you're still young (as I said) and your learning by the ropes as it is .. but improvement is something every author learns along the road :) it's something that comes naturally with every written draft and with every read .. Never stop writing Steevi :) you're an excellent author and althou your still a minor .. you write excellent :) Keep writing and never give up :) That's it for me .. I hope I covered everything and explained what needed to explain .. :) xoxo Gammateddy"
To walk the paths of death
"Grammar..sorry "
Emoji review
"Like, I'm speechless. I can't express how I feel about this book. The following emojis should be capable of expressing myself. 💓💓💓💓💓💓👀😋😍😍😍😍😎😎😎😉😉🤩😌🤫"
I- damn that's 😭 she has to endure so much pain
"Oh damn. . . This is thrilling. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait for this book to be finished❤️"
Can't wait for more!
"I loved the beginning and how it set up the story for the actual main characters. I've never seen/read anything 'Into the Woods' or of that nature, so I'm excited to join the fan base through this book! Added to my reading list to make sure I don't miss an update."
Bloody brilliant!
"My heart was pounding as this thing was nearing towards poor old Cedric filled with paralysing fear! I am disappointed, though.... that they are only three chapters! I must know more! This story is exceptionally brilliant, kept me on the edge of the seat and out of all the books I have read they did not have me clinging to suspense as you did. Godspeed to Cedric . I salute Mr Evans, jolly good show."
Amidst The Woods
"Omg, I was very involved in the story the whole time. It gives you the right amount of answers and questions, and I loved the way it is written. Like, really, it is spooky and mysterious at the same time, and I enjoyed the mysterious part the most. I'll keep reading every update. ¡Ánimo!"
Adventurous and Creepy
"The story has a pretty creepy vibe to it which makes the horror part definitely come to life, and I like the adventurous part about it. The characters are unique and the names, places, and history based on the time taken place is both amazing and accurate. The plot it very complex and in depth which makes it both intriguing and terrifying at the same time. I love the detail put into this book and I can't wait to figure out what happens at the end! :D -Ali"
4/5 🌟
"The prologue really set the tone for the story. This is why, when I started reading the first 5 chapters, grew immensely disappointed. I know these chapters tend to be a little "boring", but if written correctly, can really hype up the story for chapters to come. You did not achieve this, in my eyes."
Wow..I am interested
"Hey! So I am happy you took an old plot and decided to make it your own! I am actually worried about the kids, I am scared they might get hurt! But I am interested in what's the deal with this forest. I am curious. My advice to you is to work on your dialogue and make sure each personality of the character work in their speech. Otherwise, you are on the right track! Will keep an eye on this! Happy Writing! -Nsablo"
Quite Not Horrifying
"Quite interesting but also boring stories got repeated and there's a lot of grammar error if this is a horror story I don't know. I don't feel scared I don't like how you repeat the story not go on the spot already. If you can prove this book can improve I will change my reviews."
