What is your opinion?
Love this book!!!
"This book is so great; it has great pacing and the plot is creative and engaging. I honestly think that this would do well as a published book if you're interested in that :). Can't wait to see how it turns out!"
READ THIS BOOK
"Wow, this story was better then I expected. The mythology mix with past and present setting was a nice touch too. The wording and how things get set up are perfect. Made it easier to get lost into. Seth is funny but what made him more funny for me was the fact that I found myself saying " That was funny but he got a point" lol Definitely one of my favs, keep up the good work :)"
An Easy Read
"The plot was easy to follow and there is solid character development throughout the story. I was a little confused about where the characters were in the beginning, there needs to be more detail regarding the landscape/surroundings. Otherwise, it had a good amount of detail and I enjoyed reading this book."
Addictive
"This was so easy to get lost in. I couldn't stop clicking next chapter! The plot and descriptions were flawless. I especially loved the mixture of history and present time. Great read!"
Very good!
"This is a good read! The story flows so nicely, the author has a gift for prose. The world is so well described and fleshed out it feels like the reader is actually there. The writing style is really quite something, and allowed me to vividly picture everything that was going on. The characters are all unique and extremely well-written, each one having an extra layer to them that makes them three-dimensional and more lively overall. Their humanity makes it easy to go along with the story and understand where each character's loyalty lies, what their personality is, and what their reasons are for doing the thing they do. I would absolutely recommend to anyone looking for a good read."
The Scarlet demon
"I love the characters, the theme and plot. I love the way you mix history with modern days. I totally love the way you describe and put words into action. It makes it more comprehensive. I love the suspense and most especially the action. This is professionally written. Nicely done!"
Imcredibly written!
"The story was very interesting.It was almost flawless. I kept clicking the next chapter. The characters were described nicely and the plot was easy to undestand. The author did well with connecting the pieces. Well done!"
Wow!
"Okay... so, I absolutely loved this story! As someone who is a huge fan of Egyptology, I fell in love with your characters, and I love the way you write. I could also tell that you did your research, and your visual descriptions were excellent. Well done!"
Wonderfully written
"The story is very well written. I enjoy how the perspective changes each chapter, it allows the reader to get a better understanding of the thought, opinions, and personalities of both characters. Speaking about characters, I do enjoy Seth's relatable personality. He seems to be a friendly person and has good judgment, even though he acts impulsively at times he seems to do it with good intention, and always fixes it in the end. I enjoy Algea as well, she seems to be a caring person, and she's able to act strategically with only a little amount of time. The plot so far is easy to get caught up in. The way that you can always keep some sort of action going without any stale time going. It seems that no matter how much the reader may know, there's always more they can learn. The writing style seems flawless. You are well able to keep things vague, while at the same time the reader can still understand what's happening. Usually seeing this the reader gets caught up in the mysteries the author keeps hidden and they are unable to keep up. In contrast, you made it so that you can keep things simple, yet not everything is thrown out at once. Finally with grammar. Everything seems to be grammatically correct. No misplaced punctuation, or run-on sentences. I do enjoy your story and can't wait to see it blossom."
Good
"Not much to write really as having read all the other reviews every thing that needed to be said has been. I did enjoy the story it felt incomplete in places and didn't always flow. Enjoyable read, believable amusing characters that made the reader invest in them."
Uniquely different
"I LOVE mythology stories, especially when a writer creates something so unique, new and imaginative about ancient myths. Algea is such a badass and Seth helps with the comic relief. I love the chemistry between the two main characters and their interactions with other characters in the story; it was well written and creative. You also did an excellent job providing detailed descriptions of the different characters, battle scenes and various locations found throughout the ongoing story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good Job and keep on writing."
A great read!
"I absolutely love this story, and cannot wait for more! The descriptions are vivid and visceral, the characters are three dimensional and come alive on the page. The setting is well described. I have a degree in archaeology specializing in Egypt, and I loved the references to Egyptian mythology and history. The tale is woven so well, and these little tidbits are scattered throughout. Great job by an amazing writer! Can't wait to see what happens next!"
AMAZING!!!
"This was written so well, down to every description of characters, places and settings!! Just wow, blew me completely away! It's rare to find writing like yours and I was so pleased! The plot is unique and a breath of fresh air for me, it was new and I really enjoyed it! Keep writing, you're doing such a great job!! Much love, Coffee."
Excellent!
"The story is so great that I have no words to express it. The plot, the characters, the imagery are amazing! The way you bring out the Egyptian culture is fabulous. I am impressed by this story! Keep Writing; You deserve the five stars...Smiles;"
Fantastic
"You are really skilled writer... Cnt wait to read whole book... You book keeps reader hooked from first chapter!!"
Amazing story!!!
"Fabulous!!! At the start of the book the writing was a little choppy but I can really see how much it has progressed. The detail is really nice and the whole story is so really enthralling!"
Well written
"My knowledge about Egyptian Mythology passes little on what I read from Rick Riordan's, Kane Chronicles. Though this story was written quite good to be understood and easy to follow through. Your characters are written in such an easy way, easily understandable without feeling like I'm reading undeveloped characters with 'flat'/ 'cardboard' characteristics that don't really engage are emotions, that some beginner writers on here tend to do sometimes, as they've can't quite write characters in a way that makes them seem three-dimensional or close enough in that regard. I can't find much fault in your writing, as any mistakes are seen as nothing major and doesn't distracted from the story. Overall what I read so far, is a story that's quite enjoyable to read if anyone is a fan of egyptian mythological, with demigods and such as what you would expect if you are quite familiar with one of Rick Riordan's books. "
Reminds me of Rick Riordan's YA novels
"I love the way you've written this, it reminds me of the Percy Jackson series in the best way, with the witty, sarcastic banter of the characters, the crafting of an interesting and complex mythological lore, and the characters having powers inherited from godly parents. But make no mistake, it's unique and original in its own right. Your descriptive writing is amazing and really made me feel like I could picture the scenes happening. I'm fascinated. by the relationship between Algea and Seth, and I can't help but wonder how Seth will handle the mythological world. I've read every chapter sl far and I'm really lookimg forward to seeing where you go with it. Keep up the great work! "
A must read
"I've only read one chapter but I'm already wanting to read more. The imagery is amazing. It's interesting and after reading the first chapter you will definitely be sucked in until you finish. I think it's very well written. It struck my interest.I will definitely recommend this book to my friends."
Love it...😍🥰
"Honestly, One thing I like the most is the vivid imagery. I love the way you describe the sces. It almost make it real. This is the thing most writers lake. Another thing, I love the suspense. The book has tendency to be one of the bests. Do update soon. i would love to read on."
