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The girl and the haunted house

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Summary

A young girl is forced to move into a old house cause mom and dad die in a tragic accident her aunt takes her to this house was strange because it was a old funeral home the girl starts to see and hear things but she trys to tell her auntnd she dont believe her she questions her sanity the girl is in it alone til a incident happens and her aunt starts to belive

Genre
Horror,Scifi
Author
Betty
Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 the beginning

The beginning of aug 1975 theres a family a husband and wife and a daughter angelique shes 7 this family lived in a great mansion and had lots of money angelique was well tooken care of one day her mom and dad were coming home from a buisness trip in there nice Cadillac all white interior they were driving down the accesess road and it was a late summer night when suddenly they were struck by a desil truck and they both died instantly never arriving home her parents were gone and angeliqie had no idea she sat there waiting and waiting til she heard a knock sty the door it was state troopers there to tell her she had to go with them for her parent died in the crash angelique shouted mama papa no please god no the state troopers put there heads down and said to her come with us we're going to take you to a foster home where you will wait for your aunt priscilla til then you will be safe.

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seems interesting, but how about using commas and periods? it would make it easier to read.

3 years

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