What is your opinion?
Elves
"Good story so far. Pretty easy to follow with the romances. Very promising."
Excellent work
"First of all; I love fantasy books SO mcuh and this is no exception. You make these mythological creatures appear more human and I really enjoy that. The flow of the story is also very nice. Thank you for a good read, great work ✨😍 can't wait for more. "
Great!
"I love the way that this author, makes mythological creatures like Elves seem like humans and makes them really relatable. The chapters aren't too long so they're a manageable length and the characters are lovely. Keep up the great work! Sofia"
Great
"It's cute..❤❤..I love the flow of everything and her best friend she's sweet...❤❤.....Can't wait for the next chapter...."
My Review to 'Forever and Always: A Fairytale'
"Hey author, Your plot and characters and situations are all good on day-to-day situations. this is just a chill, fun, and enjoyable story. Even there is no plot twist yet, I think Elliana and Ismael's love story development is just enough to hook the readers. The situations are also very realistic since not all love just flash like magic and sprouts just immediately to every people.. Keep it up. =)"
nice
"wow this story is great"
Fairytale! yas
"Amazing! i love how you're so descriptive and detailed, that makes a reader; like me, to want to continue reading, everything about this book is fascinating"
Amazing
"First of all, the cover and title of the book is really good. When I saw that title, I got really excited for it.. you did a great job in this book. I just love the whole story, every bit of it. Thank you author..you're really great😊😊😊"
Fascinating fairytale
"The way you bring forward the characters simply forces the reader (like me) to be captivated in a fairytale world which you have successfully built only in 2 chapters. Great work!! Keep on writing. P.S. I would be eagerly waiting for the next chapters."
Very Descriptive!
"I love the direction this story is taking!! I like how you seem to have your own writing style, it just seems to stick out to me. I also like your use of words and how descriptive you are. It helps the reader picture what is happening and what it all looks like which makes the story more enjoyable. Especially for those who read to escape from our reality and into the writing itself!"
Must Read!
"The writing is so good and I felt it was neat and elegant. I got a dystopian feel while reading it. The characters and the description are really engaging. It made me want to read more. Looking forward to read more chapters. You are a brilliant writer. "
A fantastic novel!
"I would like to start of by saying that Abbywhite has started the book with a captivating chapter. I loved the plots, as well as, the characterisation of the characters. This was a page-turner and I read it at one go. Other than a few punctuation errors, this would be a five star rating. No readers would want to miss this book!"
Great first chapter!
"This was a really good first chapter. I love the overall fairytale aspect of it. Your main character is very kind and likeable whereas the male interest seems complex and slightly mysterious. I am excited to see where you go with this and read your next chapters. :)"
Charming Story
"This book held my interest well. Elianna lives with her best friend, Lily, in their elven home. Lily's long-time friend, Ismael, comes to stay with their family from the Southern Kingdom to start a new life there. While Elianna is standoffish at first, she soon becomes closer with Ismael. The story is very charming. I love that the author is taking time to develop Elianna and Ismael's relationship with one another instead of having them immediately attracted. It doesn't follow the mold of the same cliches we seem to experience when reading novels on budding romance. While Elianna is uneasy around him, at first. We get to see how she moves from feeling uncomfortable, to feeling shy, to growing more confident. The writing flows very well and the pace of the book is good. The transitions between emotions is well-written. There are certain points throughout the novel where the author flips from the ongoing 1st person narrative to a brief 3rd person narrative within the same chapter. I would recommend going back and making sure its all uniform in the 1st person narrative because this breaks the flow of the book and can distract readers. They're very brief transgressions that can be easily edited to continue on with the story. Another thing, was that I understand the book is about elves. Their culture seems to be pretty mundane at the moment so I hope to read more about their culture and customs that may differ from our own. I would also like to know if there are elves then are their other creatures of note? Or is this strictly a kingdom of elves and nothing more? These are just a few questions I had while reading."
Creative work 😁
"You are very good at writing and I am sure you can probably built a beautiful future. Your novel is extremely attractive 😅 yes because once I started I was unable to leave it....... 😎😊"
