What is your opinion?
I’ve never read a story like this before!
"Where do I even begin? Tanya’s way of writing puts me in a trance! I love the details, the characters, the humor, and the dialogue! I binged this in like two days because I love how unique this world is. I literally stayed up late at night to read because I couldn’t put it down. I need more and I honestly can’t wait for her to update. I always feel like I’m actually in the story because of the amazing descriptions, it’s just so easy to visualize everything in your head. She even has the power to make you love her characters and even the side characters. Overall, I just really enjoy her work. Read it and show her some love! This book is just downright amazing!"
Obey
"I've only read the first four chapters and I'm really enjoying the story so far. I love how the author really paints the scene in detail, it's so easy to see it. The story is paced well and kept me wanting to read the next chapter, even though there are lots of characters I was able to keep up. I love that all the characters are very different in personalities and looks. I'm excited to see where the plot goes!"
Obey
"I've only read the first two chapters. The author is amazing with words. Everything is described really well. I think the author is really great at the show don't tell method. This was one of those stories where I can easily picture the characters and the setting. I will continue reading."
Obey
"The author in my book is a "Word Samurai" her vocabulary is extensive and makes for great descriptions and dialog. She has a unique writing style and I have enjoyed it. The narrator is one unique feature of her style, just when you might have a question the narrator answers it. The concept itself of protected and guardian is very intriguing and the sub categories make it that much more captivating. I am left wanting more. I want to know how these relationships will grow and play out. RECOMMEND!"
Obey
"It's a amazing story. It is written perfectly. It's very descriptive and the plot is also different. I got all kind of emotion reading it. Great work!!"
Obey
"Wow! This author is a WORD GENIUS! I loved the Latin. You can tell this story is written by a very intelligent gifted writer. I found no grammatical errors. The author pulls you in and doesnt let go. The details and structure were perfect. I also loved the narrator which cam into place just as you were wondering about something the narrator would step in and offer the extra details you wanted to know. Very good job!"
Overwhelming excitement
"The title was almost Brandon can bag my back out like a sauce bottle but it was too long. This story gives me so many conflicting emotions I love all the characters.... EXCEPT THAT ONE GUY (I wont spoil) I know Brandon is a bit rough and sometimes I want to physically fight him but got that guy is hot. I'm not a fury I swear. Anyway 10 of 10 I recommend"
Obey
"I like the idea here, but to be honest I was a bit confused. I only read the first two chapters, so it probably gets easier to read as you get further in. There are too many characters in the first chapter, you've thrown your readers in at the deep end, which can be a good thing, but there are so many characters and names that's it difficult to keep track of them all. With this mind though, the dialogue and playful banter between the characters makes it clear how easy and open their friendships are. The only other thing is, your chapters are quite long. You don't have to take anything out to fix this, just break them into smaller chapters."
Obey
"Hello! I'm only through the first chapter but I do have a few things to say. First of all, I love how you've taken a different approach to the story, unlike the ones I've read before, with the use of a narrator in the middle. It makes the situation easier for the readers to understand so hats off for your creativity. However there are also a few things I noticed that I believe would help you to improve your story. One thing is, I feel like you have to be more careful when introducing characters into the story. Because honestly, I was a little confused to differentiate between the characters and it may cause confusion for the other readers as well. But overall, I love your language and can't wait to see your hard work win the hearts of many! All the best and keep up the good work!"
