What is your opinion?
Great Suspense
"I really enjoyed reading this. Having it all from the one perspective made it very interesting and suspenseful. The ending was a very big twist. Well written."
My Review on the Storu
"Most stories have grammatical issues , and most that do don’t have them take too much from the story. Your will improve with time. That being said you have a solid story and some really interesting characters. Your writing is interesting and enjoyable. So keep it up, you have a lot of talent! "
Wowww just wowwwwww
"I am hoooked. I usually only read romance but this is great. "
Mysterious
"The plot is great. I would love to see how you connect all the parts - the dream to the murder. It's just so mysterious and that role of that caped man. What is he upto? I am now waiting for your next update."
The Lost
"Really great story and imaginative. Just needs work on grammar and writing style. Read as much as possible so you can get a sense of rhythm and flow. But I am invested as excited for more!"
Good
"I really like the plots and story.. you expressed really well. Don't worry about grammatical errors, with time you will get better.. even I have the same problem with grammar..😊😊😊 no worries..I'm looking forward fo read more of your books.."
Good Story
"It’s a good story and I like where it’s going but grammar needs little work. "
Intriguing
"You have a flow with the words. Connects me to the book. The plot is interesting and has me waiting for the next update! "
Intriguing
"I think the plot is great and you have potential....try using grammarly and please do avoid using texting language...I noticed you have used 'u' 'n'... with a little bit of editing I think you are good to go....keep writing more...😊😊"
Interesting!
"Although it's your first book you're better than many beginners. It's great just a little notes like don't use.... Are a ? Or use shorthands like ‘n’ instead of and. Lol it made me remind how I used ‘ohk’ when I first started. Nice effort and nice plot. The things I told you right now are obviously learned by experience. Keep it up! "
Awesome
"This book's plot was mysterious and downright awesome. I was so into what I was reading. I would recommend spacing out the paragraphs and trying to fix some grammar. Grammarly is really good. Overall, the detailed descriptions made this book super cool! Keep going, I want to read more!"
The Lost
"Your story has a very unusual plot that will most definitely grab readers' attention. Your choice of words is also great except your sentences are too 'sentencey', there are no sentence connections. Just different sentences put together. Also, your grammar, punctuation, and spelling, and paragraphing need some work. All you need to do is read more, research more, and most importantly write more. With time your skills will develop and you already have a beautiful imagination to match it. Download Grammarly, it works like a charm and it will help you self edit. Great work. "
It could be great
"I know it is hard getting a bad review and I am terribly sorry to have to give one. You have the potential to be great the story idea is very good but you have to pay a lot more attention to grammar and spelling. The grammar errors are very distracting making it hard to focus on the plot. I use Grammarly and it has really helped me become better with my spelling and grammar, please try it and above all - keep writing! Don't let bad reviews stop you, us it to make yourself and your writing better. The more you try, the better you will become. Good luck."
