What is your opinion?
Sirens Love
"Choosing the lovely sirens as a central feature was brilliant! I was so caught up in the appearances of Hera, and KirKe . . ."
🤩 wowowowoowowoow
"Loved it yeeeeeeeesss great job author I was skeptical but I loved it definitely recommend this to everyone ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👍🏽"
Epic
"That's exactly what I felt after completing the book. The book has been a perfect roller-coaster ride of adventure and emotions. There were a few grammatical errors but as the author said that she's editing, so I believe it's gonna come out in the best form. All the best for the future. Keep up the good work!! 🙌❤"
Good work!
"Your story is quite an unique story of its own. I never read any stories that are mainly about sirens and I found how you interpret them (mainly the main character who's a siren), a refreshing way of going about your story. You good at being descriptive and i can very much follow along and envision everything that's going on. The characters are quite written out pretty well for them to feel expressive and engaged in our emotions. Wonderful job so far. I really hope others will engage in your book. With the amount of work you put in your writing. You really deserve it. "
Great potential! 👍🏻
"Even though the story isn't entirely finished and is a draft. You did a pretty good job on what you written so far. I never read anything that's based on Sirens, and I found that a pretty interesting thing to based your story on. Your writing style is quite simple, yet does a good job being descriptive. The characters are written in a pretty good way that don't make them entirely seem one-dimensional, as most inexperienced/beginner writers struggle to make a character with characteristics that make them seem real and change and grow overtime. Anyway mistakes such as grammar and such are quite minor and don't distract from the story. Overall, this has the potential of being a good novel and good job on what you written so far. I wish you luck on your writing life. 👍🏻"
Beautiful!
"So interesting and bewitching! The plot itself is lovely, wow!!"
Unique storyline
"The plot is well thought of and the flow is great. This is a really unique story. I love the descriptions in the story. Just a few grammatical errors but those could be worked on by editing "
Amazing!!!
"I loved your writing style. The concept is something new and unique. I love your descriptions. Will continue to read it. Good luck!"
Beautiful and magical!
"It is beautiful! The story is filled with excitement of reading more. To be honest please just give a little more details as it confused me a bit but still i like the story 😊"
Mythical and Magical!
"I loved the concept very much! Very excited to see the journey of the sirens throughout your book! Keep up the amazing work! Love❤"
The Sirens Love review
"This is amazing!!!! Beautiful writing!!! I know you probably don't want me to keep gushing about your writing so I won't. Anyway, the way you write it is perfect! Since it is just the beginning and it is so good I can't and don't have anything to critique. I will continue to read and try to give some more critiques though. Keep on writing!"
I love it 💯%
"Thiiiiiisssssss issssss aaaammmmmmaaaaazzzziiiinnnnnggggg please please i meed more 🥺🥺🥺"
The potential is there!
"I liked it! I had always been a fanatic of the Siren Mythology, so seeing another book filled with this theology was refreshing. The author added her unique twists to the common knowledge about the myths which was also a pleasure to read! One thing I do suggest for the author to improve her work and polish it is using this incredible page called, Grammarly. The software will definitely help polish up the writing along will the punctuation mistakes and all that good stuff! "
Interesting
"I loved this!! I've read a few books on Greek Mythology and this is the only one that has talked about Poseidon. Honestly, I needed this type of breakthrough and learn about the gods of the sea. I love the descriptive element that you have and how you put so much detail into the littlest of things. The story has an amazing flow to it and you have an excellent way of keeping me interested throughout. You have an excellent way of expressing your ideas and putting the reader in the shoes of the protagonist. The story also starts at an interesting and potholed path but smooths out gradually. It is also at the right pace which is wonderful and very amazing. The mystery in the air is thrilling and with every new chapter comes a greater twist which just makes my blood rush. We also got a lot of insight from Peisinoe and very few from Dion, which were added in the ending chapters of the book. There were some spelling mistakes here and there but not that many. The ending is extremely touching and sweet however I feel like the story does not give too much insight on the romance betwen Peisinoe and Dion as there are many chapters that are on the problems faced in Atlantis and what not. The book is marvelous nonetheless and it was such an exciting read for me!! GOOD JOB!!👍👍"
The Sirens Love
"Overall, I really liked this the greek mythology elements were given their own take. Though it feels like Hera could of been used more considering the conflict is about marriage. Also having a pretty interesting plot point about who the male love interests mom as a throw away line felt like a wasted opportunity to flesh the main male love interest out. Because to me he was the only not so great element in this story. The female protagonist had very few scenes with him that weren't hasty flashbacks. that didn't convey hardly anything about the relationship. The protagnist spend more time with his older brother. Also he's so unconflicting about going aginst the people who raised him yeah their wrong and he knows but shouldn't he and his second brother be sad? The main female protagonist wasn't bad as far as protagonists go. Her goal and wants were pretty straightforward and in the scenes where she helpless, sad or scared. I really felt it the writer has a good grasp of how to convey emotions though language. While the world building wasn't the strongest it was serviceble enough. The suspense/horror elements were handled well. Overall it was a good story but the other characters involved in the conflict besides the protagonist could use some work. Still this did not completely ruin my enjoyment and i had a lot of fun reading it. I would recommend this to siren and fantasy lovers. 4/5"
The Siren
"The book is quite interesting, looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story pans out"
