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Amazing !
"Your book is amazing 😉! The thing I loved is your writing style and the story’s good "
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Lovely
"The story is really good. The discriptions make me be able to really see the story. It's very well written and I can't way to read the rest of it!"
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Just a beautiful piece of art
"The story is so very well designed and intricate with details that it awes me. The story is just so fricking marvelous that god damn everybody would love it. Lovely read with perfect grammar for all those grammar nazi sitting with their noses scrunched up for nice books. Love, sruthi 💖"
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So much potential!
"As this review is written, there are only 4 chapters out. So far, they are captivating to the reader with the detailed descriptions! Intriguing plot and characters are enough to hook any reader. Sure, there were some questionable choices when it came to grammar and choice of words but that's easily fixed during editing, and none of it bothered me too much. I should say that I am not a native English speaker, so I cannot judge the writing part too much. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed the story!"
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4 chapters read
Lovingly described
"Your descriptions are detailed really well, loved your first chapter. so far I am liking it, would recommend to anyone looking for a good romance to follow!"
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Incredible Story!
"I love this story so far! Please update soon!!"
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1 chapters read
Vivid style
"The writing style is very vivid making the story seems so much real and like if it's really happening. Delightful read!"
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Wonderful
"A wonderful start. The imagery the author uses is beautiful and the concept is interesting. I already find myself intrigued by how Olivia will manage to find herself in love with someone else. Keep up the good work! "
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This is an awesome story. I'm just loving it! It's Amazingly Beautiful. The author is really talented.
"I loved every bit of this book. Each and every description is so beautifully written. I recommend this book to everyone. Everyone should read this book. It's awesome! I gave these ratings because according to me this book deserves such ratings and it's worth reading. This book deserves recognition. "
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A smooth read!
"The story has a great start and brilliant potential. You have an amazing narration as you describe your scenes beautifully. But one thing I would suggest you is that include spaces between the paragraphs so that it is easy to distinguish. Also small edits can fix the minute typos you have. And I absolutely love love/hate relationships so I'm totally in for it. Looking forward to more of this! ❤️🙌"
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Descriptions on point!!
"I love the descriptive way you write! So elegant and beautiful. The story has a good premise, characters sound very becoming. I suggest you make adequate spaces and gaps for the story as it continues, to flow better and be easier to read, other than that, it's fantastic! Well done! Much love, Coffee"
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A smooth flowy read.
"The writer had put a lot of efforts in descriptions whether it was for Olivia or Rachel or the Place Heartland and India. Being an Indian I am really excited to see how India plays a cupid in blooming the bud of love between the main leads. All the best to talented writer. Keep up the descriptive writing it really flows like water in a river, smoothly. "
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Love it!
"This story keeps you hooked. The author pays attention to ever little detail and make it seem super realistic. Amazing work!"
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Vivid description
"I genuinely love the plot of this book already. The beautiful setting, well-rounded characters, amazing word choice- truly got me hooked. And I will look forward to reading more chapters once they come out. Good work!"
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Page turner
"Interesting plot with impressive description which made me hooked to the book. I like the character of Olivia. The way she felt with everything is amazing. "
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Great descriptions
"The surroundings are described very well and with love. There is a couple, whose relationship is looked through care and romantic feelings. The author has rich language and great use of words. Personally, I would love for fewer descriptions and more action, but that is just my taste. Great story overall!"
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