What is your opinion?
The story was clean n clear with sweet emotions . It depicts a perfect example of an ideal love❤️😍😘 over all the story was adorable 😊😍
"Plot of story was sweet n simple It's all good to read for beginners who use to find love stories. This one is perfect with easy wordings Overall I loved it😍❤️ Nice try "
Short story
"I loved this sweet short story. Jeh was swoon-worthy with his love for Tia. I appreciated that they took the time to communicate and solve the misunderstanding that Moon created. So lovely :)"
Sweet
"It was a really short story... but it's just SO SWEET! I love Jeh and his swoon worthy words🥰🥰 I personally suggest you to maybe think about making a long story about Jeh and Tia, including their background, physical attributes, the environmental setting and everything. You can then include this work as an event in that story. It's because you have a good potential for something beyond these short stories with a single event. There are quite a lot of grammar errors. The first one o spotted was in the first chapter. You don't use past verb following 'didn't' like you've used in that sentence. You might want to use a present verb there. Others, there were some errors worth mixed past and present tense, sentence structuring and such. All in all, I'd say you've done a good work and would love to see this turned into a long, beautiful story. Best wishes! Keep writing! 🥰❣❣"
Worth the read
"Great start keep it going!! Nice character development"
Potential for a longer one
"You are in tune with young people's feelings which is not very common, unless you are of course very young yourself. It was a very pleasant read! Think about writing something with longer or more chapters. It will help you develop your characters and your writing further! 💐💐💐"
SHORT AND SWEET ❤
"Very beautiful and so good message I got from this story.I will recommend to read it as it won't take to much time.. Love the writer you are fabulous and I wish you have a bright future in writing...you should make big stories...😊❤"
NICE
"I loved the ending alot alot.....I get why Jeh didn't push Moon off but...I really secretly wished he did....but it was really nice.."
Cute
"The story has good potential because it's sweet and charming. It also portrays that no matter the misunderstandings, true love always finds its worth. However, there are a few suggestions I would like to make: 1. You should increase the length of each chapter. Despite it being a short story, you can focus on the setting of the environment, the characters, their background. In short, be more descriptive. 2. There are also a lot of grammatical errors but that's nothing to worry. It can be fixed with thorough editing. With these points, in mind, I think the story can reach its true potential. Overall, your book was engaging and I liked reading it. Wish you all the best for your future!!!"
Misunderstanding
"A very sweet little love story.💓 It was an old plot but still, it was a great story and I loved it. 👏👏"
Very Moving ...
"Just typical every day life! Why do we have to fall oit with misunderstsndings!? People need to be more open and honest with each other. I really liked your story. Some grammar errors but it doesn't take away to spive this story tells. Really a good read!"
Moral of the story!
"The ending was very sweet and all, so it's nice and pretty. I do think there could be more to the story, but the author decided to keep it short and pretty which I'm also ok with :) Good story, it just needs something more to make it pop? Some sprinkles, some more drama, some more torment? I do hope that you try to improve your grammar and spelling, if English isn't your first language, you could really turn this more magical with description and other things! Good luck love :)"
I hate jeh😂
"Ya nice story, ☺️ but i am not convinced with the reason why he didn't pushed moon, just put something strong in the story and sometimes a story needed strong hold "
A Good Start
"This is a good start. I liked the idea, but the execution needs some work. The plot is an oldie but a goodie, and the character names are unique. However, these features get bogged down by your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. This is an easy fix though. Just run your writing through a grammar editor and all will be better. Overall, I think this has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work."
