What is your opinion?
The Lost Queen
"Great book! Surely there will be a sequel?"
The lost Queen
"Liked it so far, have no one to share it with!Hate having to do these reviews after every couple chapters "
Dilemma
"Who is the real prince here? Is the present king. Mad? Is Ravinna the real mother?"
Lost queen
"Hope to read the rest of this story soon. Loved it so far"
The Lost Queen
"Great reading, I loved it. I noticed you haven't updated in 10 months, can't leave a girl hanging. Would love some updates on it. Loved it from all the way down in Alabama. You hit it right in my interest of books. "
The lost queen
"I love this story. Wonder when the other chapters are coming out"
Really Impressive!
"I really, REALLY enjoyed this book! I loved how you build your characters. They have a sort of, 180 degree turn. You show them their strengths and weaknesses (which we all can relate to. To anyone who is reading this review, please follow this author. A great talent already in the making!"
Great story so far.
"This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is quite simple yet descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions.. Any mistakes such a spelling and grammar are seen as minor and don't distract from the story. Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings. "
Hooking!
"I really likes this. I especially liked your magic mechanics and your description. I think this is an amazing idea."
The lost queen
"Beautiful story i lie the main character. She has a lot on her plate but you can see her develop through the story. I'm intrigued to see more. Love the concept and structure of the story. Can't wait for more. Keep it up!! I will be waiting for updates!"
Amazing!
"All you need to do is read the first sentence, and then you're hooked. It's definitely a must-read! The writing style and descriptions flow like water. I've just started reading it, and I'm excited to keep doing so. So much respect for the author!"
I am impressed
"The sophistication of this author is amazing. The story is written so you, the reader, are completely engrossed by the end of the first chapter. I like her use of language as all of the details are described clearly and beautifully. You can picture what is going on with out the use of too much of your imagination. Continue doing great work. Be aware of the sentence structures when editing. There were just a couple of incomplete statements but not many. And they were definitely not a distraction."
Great work from Arella!
"I absolutely loved this! The characters were believable, strong, and developed. I love the concept, the plot, and everything about it! I think Wren is such a great main character, and I love how she's progressing and adapting to the new world and all the mysteries that come with it."
Wren-ching Fate ...
" Wren is a beautiful, intelligent young woman and yet her life is somehow shrouded in mystery. There’s the sense of something dark creeping around the corners of her existence and she is chased in the forest by a strange man. Her mother comes to rescue her and is oddly nonchalant about the mystifying stranger or the fact that she requires for both her and her daughter to carry knives. Wren is puzzled by her mother’s odd behavior but is not necessarily troubled by them. Until she wakes up in the morning and discovers an attractive but sharp eared stranger staring back at her. “You’re not human.” Her mother replies. Then who is she? The answer to this question terrifies her as well as ignites a new sense of purpose in her soul. Will Wren accept her ultimate destiny? Or will she doom herself and her people to an unkind fate? Aella Stormwind does a good job at building sympathy for Wren as well as passion in her novel. Her characters are well written and believable. I could find no grammatical errors or misspelled words. Plus her pacing was excellent (a skill I’m still working on.) I know I’m concerned for Wren’s fate. Here’s hoping for the best for her. "
I love this story!!
"The whole plot is interesting and your descriptions make imagining everything a breeze. The characters are well written and everything flows smoothly. I especially love that she questions the idea soulmates instead of just accepting it immediately. It's refreshing to see the female lead break away from the cliché. Great work! I haven't finished reading all the chapters, but I'll definitely keep reading!"
The Lost Queen
"This story is awesome so far! The details are so beautifully written. There's a sense of mystery so far, and it compels me to read on. Your characters are written so well and just jump off the page. They feel real. Definitely going to read more by you. Keep writing! You're doing great"
A fantastic fantasy!
"I know, only four chapters are published so far. Well, five, if you count the first one I assume it the prologue. But let me tell you, even these few chapters are so good that I suddenly want to read the next one as fast as I can and at the same time wait for the whole book to be completed so that I could binge read it without torturing myself with the wait for a new chapter every now and then. The story actually got me goosebumps as I read about the transformation of Wren. And everything is just so... fantastic! I just can't wait for another chapter. "
