What is your opinion?
Mysterious Roommate
"10/10 The whole story was amazing! "
BEST !!!!!
"Bro your story is amazing. greaaattttttttt ."
Mysterious roommate
"It’s is amazing so far the author has kept the reader on edge and it always makes me carry one reading."
Mysterious roommate
"Had absolutely no idea where this was going at the beginning, really enjoyed this quick read, liked the characters and there story past and present "
Mysterious roommate.
"It is a book that I am really looking forward to as it was very interesting. Haven't read the entire book yet but the plot is intriguing. I think it deserves more rating than what it has got. Would highly recommend this book as this is something which has got me hooked. Bye to whomsoever is reading my review as I really want to know what happens next. ^_^"
Fantastic 💕
"To be honest I already read this already like three times and counting 🤣. The plot is amazing 👍. Also I love how the story ends honestly, I'm very emotional when it comes to these kinds of endings. So you can a imagine me with a box of tissues 😂. Besides the other books that you have this is my favorite one. "
Nice ending
"Though there were some grammatical errors but it did not interrupted with the flow. It was kind of rushed in the end but the twist was nice. In the last chapters they have talked about next life ... Are you going to release next book?"
Mysterious roommate
"This author knows how to keep things interesting. Very unique writing style where the characters come alive. There are tons of details and descriptive paragraphs that really help the reader connect with the story. There's a few grammatical errors but all in all it's a great book!"
Amazing so far
"I think the story is amazing so far, there are some grammar errors but the story content is blocking. So thats a good thing, I totally like the chemistry between them, hopefully they come together. Im in chapter 4 and all the descriptions are amazing. As a teen, I am enjoying so far. I actually like the fact that the atiry is very understandable and not like very complex as well. Many times, I have seen stories where they try using complex words (to kind of show off) Which I dont like that. Basically, your story is easy to understand. Tysm for this amazing reading experience! So far 😉😃"
Worth The Read
"I’ve really enjoyed the author’s writing style throughout the story, the description and explanations are very vivid making it really engaging when you read each chapter. Moreover the chemistry between the two main characters is amazing, I want to see them get together so bad🥺❤️ I’m currently on Chapter 18 and I can’t wait till you update more chapters!"
Very mysterious indeed
"Though the writer missed a few punctuation errors, I loved the story and it was easy to flow with. Your writing style is very stimulating, but also simple. You captured my interest right from the beginning, I definitely cannot wait to read more.👍"
Mysterious roomate
"I like it so far ,nice and interesting plot."
Mysterious roomate
"I feel like this story has a lot of potential, as although the plot was good the grammatical errors and just confusion of how fast-paced it was (especially the first chapter) really took away from the amazing plotline. I felt that the first chapter, although did really well as it kept me intrigued, was quite frankly all over the place. In the second chapter, I could not understand what was going on and it was hard to read as there was no proper spacing between paragraphs. Yet I do have to congratulate the author as the third chapter was a huge improvement and I can see the author is getting better in each chapter. Now the positives of this story, it keeps you so intrigued and you find yourself wanting to know more. The plot is so great and one of the only critiques of the storyline is if you hold some tense bits for longer so the reader theorizes what could happen and this will give you more engagement. I feel like with proper grammar and punctuation this story would be so good. Keep writing I know you will keep getting better and better."
Really good
"I like the idea, how they can help each other with their powers, how she can grant wishes and they can both talk to ghosts, especially Allan he cracks me up. You've got really good characters which is vital. Your grammar and punctuation needs some work, but that's already in the other reviews. Sometimes you somehow miss letters in words and just put a space instead. This is all of course just editing. The only big thing I found that was offputting was how you end chapters. Having a cliffhanger is fine, but you don't need them every chapter. Also ending the chapters with ... doesn't really make sense. You could just leave them out."
Enjoyable
"A great story so far. The writing style was nice. The characters were relatable and simplistic. Minor grammatical errors, but it did not take away from the plot of the book. A nice read. "
Its good
"It's a good book , I really liked the story . There aren't any mistakes just some typos here are there . But I find the story a little confusing , I do get what the story is but for me , I had to read it at a slow pace . Other than this the story is good 😊"
Mysterious roommate
"There were some major grammar errors that made it impossible to finish reading the story. Punctuation is easy to fix with an online editor, but there are missing prepositions, while the author confuses words and keeps mixing up the tenses. I cannot offer an opinion plot-wise as I only managed to get through the first 3 chapters, but the flow was pretty stilted and, in some cases, just a jumbled mess of info dump. The story needs major re=writes, in my honest opinion. Keep up the hard work!"
