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I can’t even express it 😭

"Your summary was what drew me into reading your work, you only have two chapters done as of now but even then I have enjoyed reading your work. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!!!!! "

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My type

"I am incredibly infatuated by the summary and first chapter. Don't hesitate to upload the others! I 'm luv'n the flow and the interesting concept. - S.W."

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Great start!

"This was a really good start to a story. The sibling dynamics between Melody and her two older brothers in amazing. You can tell there's a lot of love there. It would be interesting to see where the story goes from there!"

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Love it!!!

"I throughly enjoyed this!! It’s very well edited and formatted nicely. The moment I read the summary, it pulled me in. Honestly, it’s pretty much perfect for chapter one! Keep up the good work, I’ll definitely be adding this to my continue list :)"

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A Strong Start

"I like the focus on family, and the dynamic presented is not just believable, it's natural. This is a good read and I'm hoping for more."

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Melody of tomorrow

"First of all the summary is very engaging. The story has a great start. I will be looking forward for more. Great work👏👏"

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Enjoyable first chapter

"I liked the dynamic between the three siblings. The protagonist, Melody comes across as a strong willed young lady who is also thoughtful to other's feelings. The tone is energetic leaving me wanting to know what will happen in further chapters."

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