What is your opinion?
Crazy Rich Kids
"Extremely relatable topics being dealt with. Love the characters and the plot. The name can be deceiving"
Crazy rich kids
"Didn't expect it to be in a hospital crazy plot. I love it. It's different from what I have read in the past "
Crazy Rich Kids
"The premise was good. It's an interesting take over a mental institution with its patients. The title is a little misleading, at first glance you think it's about a bunch of rich high school students, but the actual story is pretty different. I like how the atmosphere is shown as a friendly place, everyone is warm and welcoming, The flow is really good and easy to read. And the descriptions are good, and the story is enjoyable. I can't wait to continue reading!"
Rich Kids
"Unexpectedly I didn't expect this to be on a mental hospital. I thought it was going to revolve differently. Overall good storry, some repeatitive but nothing outof the norm. The flow is good and someone it made me feel strange in a good way. The story has potential and even though its different. it's good. So keep up the good work! XX"
Crazy Rich Kids
"We must admit the title didn't tempt us, and we thought, 'Oh no! Not another snowflake story with characters bursting with a sense of entitlement. But as soon as we got into the story we realised it wasn't that sort of tale at all. We loved it - and wish it was finished. The premise is excellent, and unexpected, the writing is very sound, and the characters sing - not literally, but certainly figuratively. Great book - we would recommend it to anyone."
Heartfelt
"I'm excited for more chapters to be posted to this story! It has a great mixture of seriousness, comedy, and even a touch of romance and steamyness. The characters are very likeable and Ace is intriguing. I can emphasize with Alana, so I had feelings for sure since the story is so far in her perspective. I'm really invested in the characters, and I think that's what is strong in this book. Mental health is a serious topic, and I think this book does a good job addressing the issues while also humanizing people who struggle with mental illness. There are some punctuation errors, but those are easily fixed, and there's some repetition of the same words within the same paragraph, but again, that's an easy fix, and it's not too distracting. You will still be able to really enjoy the book. I really love this so far, and I'm anxious for more chapters to be released! The characters are so fascinating, so I want to know what happens!"
4/5 🌟
"The only problem I have with this book is the character, Ace. He seems like the stereotypical bad boy- muscly, mental problems, somehow hot as hell, anger issues, and extremely horny. He even has a basic bad boy name: Ace Knox. Like seriously???? He's really throwing the book off for me, and it stopped becoming enjoyable, he's definitely your wink link. Especially compared to the other characters, who are extremely well thought out and complex."
SC
"Your book was really good, I loved the characters and the plot, but the title was kind of misleading. Other than that, the book was overall good and I loved the way you wrote it: your style."
Crazy Rich Kids
"Although I went through really quickly this is genuinely a good book "
Crazy Rich Kids
"Although I went through really quickly this is genuinely a good book "
Crazy rich kids
"The premise of a story set in a mental health institute was interesting, at first, but it soon lost that vibe. None of the characters behaves like they are in a psychiatric ward, and it feels more like summer camp. There was definitely a lot of giggling (you do use that word a lot) and the characters' behaviour doesn't instil any sense of mental health problems, especially in the way they talk about their condition to strangers and how they treat themselves and their own problems. I need to see some darkness in such characters, and not schoolgirls giggling at each other, so maybe try adding some levels. Punctuation could use a bit of work, too. Keep up the hard work!"






