What is your opinion?
Caged
"You have a beautiful way of writing. So far I like where you are taking this story to. But there are some issues which I’ve faced while reading. If it’s possible to quote the conversations a little more clear and some space so readers can differentiate. I am loving the story and hope to read more."
Caged
"The story is good and I admire your power of narration and style. The plot is alright, your character development is intriguing and I just like the story structure, I mean the way you alternate the characters was awesome. Perhaps if I say you didn't put up a nice work, I should be asking for too much! Good work, Ann."
Liking this so far
"Intriguing so far cannot wait to see what happens "
Absolutely Fabulous!
"This story from the beginning to the end is just FABULOUS!!! I've never read such an intriguing and absorbing story on Inkitt before. I would like to appreciate the author for writing such an awesome story. I was especially astounded because of the Plot and Character development. The characters that are created are also so realistic and the dialogues are also really understandable. I think if you write more stories, they will be one of the trending stories on Inkitt. So, you should work hard and continue writing awesome and surprising stories that will be famous worldwide. 😇"
Good Book
"I really liked the story and the plot. The characters are very well described though I have one problem though. The lack of quotation marks were making it difficult for me to understand the book. Overall, the book and the plot is well written and well designed. Even the grammar is on point. just some minor errors. I'm liking the book so far. Good work."
Great
"I like romantic action stories. you did good job"
✌️✌️
"Well done on a good book so far."
Intense and Smooth flow of story. I hope readers and writers can appreciate this work. It's awesome. I don't mind the grammars because the writer can improve more soon. Hope you all support the writer until the last chapter of this awesome book.
"Wondering why I put 4 stars in the final 2 for style and grammar. Because I think you can do more. Your writing is amazing. The plot is common but I think you'll do different in your own ways. It's.... Wow! I love it! And I'll stay tuned for more chapters. Hope you keep on writing . No one is perfect as a writer but we all have unique ways to show it. And I believe that you'll do great soon! 😊"
Worth reading
"Your writing style and vocabulary is good. I really like your writing style but there are some things I would like to point out: 1. I don't know which place or time are the characters in. Although you depicted there condition very accurately but still I don't know where they live. How I should imagine there house or other things. 2. I have noticed that in 3rd and 4th chapter, paragraphs are too long. Nobody likes it. It feels like skipping them and then the reader might skip some important part. Other than that everything is beautiful. I love the story💜"
Caged
"A fascinating start! I like how even though Gizelle and Lucifer are very different characters, they seem to have similar backgrounds. Upper class, trying to run away from abusive families to start a new life. I love little Lizzie, I will always have soft spots for Elizabeths though as it's my middle name. Keep up the fantastic work! Sofia"
well written
"Your descriptions are great and up to the point. Ignoring the punctuation errors, everything is great. Keep writing!"
Amazing
"Your writing style is amazing and descriptive love the plot so far."
Oops
"At first, I was like”EROTICA? Hmm idk about this…” Then I read it and I loved it. Keep up the great work hun💜💜💜👏👏"
It’s the beginning of a wonderful story
"First and foremost you are an amazing writer ☺️ the description and writing is great. But just a few errors here and there that can be fixed with a few editing touches. If it’s possible to make the character’s conversation a little more known and what I mean is the quotation and some space so readers can differentiate. I found that in the beginning. But aside that this story is off to a wonderful journey🤗 I love the plot it’s interesting and draws you to the next chapter. So I can’t wait for the upcoming updates. I can’t wait to see how bad Lucifer would like to stop himself from getting caged!😏"
First Chapter review
"An intriguing beginning. I want to read more. I'm not sure how I feel about Lucifer but he appears to be in the role of the flawed protector with Lizzie. I look forward to more."
Caged
"The story is interesting so far.( I don't know why but it kind of reminds me of Twilight.) The story has a unique idea to it though. "
Caged
"First, I did enjoy your story. I was assuming it would somehow be about werewolves hence the title. The first chapter was packed already with the dramatic questions of which readers would aspire to read and unravel more about the characters in the succeeding chapters. I already assumed mature content would be a hot sizzling one, I'm sure readers have detected the climax on that chapter (chapter3) nevertheless it was fair that it should be in that part though with or without it, it will still be fine. I think I agree with sweetP31lover, few edits are needed, just refer to her review. Chapter four, the cliff there was interesting to look forward to...You have a good story here, love romance, action, drama, are gonna be mixed in this story I assumed. But regardless of how you set it, I know it is going to be awesome in the long run. God bless.. and just keep writing."
Needs a bit of work..
"I haven't finished the story but here's what I think of it so far; It's good. But it needs a lot of improvements. By this I mean checking the grammar. The things are described and the words themselves are great, there's just a few poor grammar and punctuation choices that can be easily solved with a proof-read. I would also suggest using a larger range of sentence types would make it more interesting and flow better. You use the word emaciated a few too many times, which to me gets quite aggravating and doesn't give me, the reader, an accurate picture of her. Also the little blurb-style introduction at the top is a bit confusing, because the words are all run together and aren't separated appropriately."
Very Promising!
"Can't wait to see where this goes. An incredible start. Might want to revise and check punctuation, though. Otherwise it's off to a great start! 🥳"
