What is your opinion?
Really intriguing start
"This is a good start to what I'm sure will be an interesting book. The characters and their back stories are given in little snippets throughout to give the reader an idea of how they all fit together and understand their feelings when dealing with current events. There were a few spelling issues, but mostly grammatical. The biggest was after dialogue. Always lower case after dialogue. For example: "I can't believe it!" said Suzie. Instead of: "I can't believe it!" Said Suzie. There were also a few places where I was a little lost when jumping back and forth in time or between characters. Some sort of break will help with this. Still, I really like where this book is going and how the emotions and different personalities of the characters are captured."
Blew my mind
"I love a book with catchy synopsis and yours had exactly that, and the names of each chapters are different and unique, I love that as well. The story is also captivating."
Review
"Very interesting plot and kept me on the edge. Keep it up"
This is Amazing.
"The plot is interesting, which makes the story very captivating. The narration and characters are great and make's you keep reading."
Love
"I loved it, just the right amount of action for me, the flow was great and your dialogues were amazing. Great job, I seriously enjoyed reading this. I would suggest going over the grammar one more time but its not that important. I loved it, keep writing :)"
Xyanium
"Loved it! You have very descriptive writing and the dialogue with the voice changer made me laugh. I hope you continue to write. :)"
XYANIUM
"Amazing read. Really enjoyed the plot of the story. I like the characters, and how close they are as a team. Its fast paced, and want to know what happens next."
Wonderfully executed...
"I have to say, this is rarely something that I would be so pleasured in finding, and it makes me leave all my work just to come and enjoy reading. It is the many joys of reading which I find tempting. It is also very rewarding. Your work is very vivid, and it makes you follow so much about what is happening and what they are doing. I love the bond of your characters and the way they are interacting with each other, as well as Mike and Gold. It makes me want more, and I won't be afraid to urge you to continue writing. I love the work you have done on your characters so far. For your plot development, it is solid in my opinion so far. You do need to fix things up a little when using commas and your dialogues need a little tightening up. But nothing a little editing cannot make new once again. I am smiling as I am doing this because I know how happy I would be too. I hope you never get writer's block and your story turns out wonderfully. I am following you, so the update would be received gratefully when you have done so. All the best wishes and happy writing to you!"
Xyanium
"The plot and narration was great. Waiting for new chapters. "
XYANIUM
"THIS IS AMAZING 👏 LOVED IT CAPTIVATING PLOT"
Go Nick
"So I think the highlight of the entire story was chapter 4. Just because I love the descriptions. It was easy to read and If I'm correct it's still ongoing so if you're a reader this is your chance to influence the story in how it's written. Leave a comment and a like because this story is worth it."
Must read!
"Good story line. The first chapter is my favorite as I loved Nick's character so much. The writing style of the author is captivating. Good job author! A must read book :)"
Very Cool
"The intro chapter was amazing. It was interesting and captivating but it didn't feel like everything was happening at once, which was nice. The whole story flowed well together, and the plot/characters seem well thought out. REally original and creative ideas!"
Xyanium
"I love it :) and really enjoyed it. But for me, it was happening too fast. Interesting plot and the first chapter was amazing :) Keep up good work :) looking forward to next parts of the story."
Fascinating and intriguing
"I loved every part"
Intriguing
"It is something to keep reading. Waiting for another chapter. But why did Nick die? Is there something (back story) or we can read this in the next chapter? Story line are good but I feel jumping from one scene to another. From a birthday party to digging the key, to Nick died, to the group scattered - it’s happening so fast. It’s like movie preview? 😬 It’s nice to see some adjectives sometime in a book. Anyway, good book. But a good editor would make this book even better. "
