What is your opinion?
The one that came back
"This book kept me on my toes. I really enjoyed it. The plot then the twist. It was exciting and thrilling. "
The one that came back
"Like the story it was very exciting can't wait to see the end"
Good
"Different but good different in it's own way of story telling,plot twisting.I liked d story"
Mysterious Story with Many Twists!
"This story's concept is quite thrilling with many twists and turns keeping readers on the edge of their seats. The characters are wonderful, and it really makes you want to unravel the mystery that they are thrown into in this book. The grammar can have some improvements, but the overall story is one that will keep readers wanting more! A very great work, and I love the thrilling, mysterious twists that are brought into the tale. It really stands out against other stories like it."
The One That Came Back
"Didn’t really care for the story. Had a hard time to read it as I couldn’t really get into it. "
Kept me guessing
"It was a good and exciting read. The author managed to portray the characters’ feelings of unease and confusion with each word. It was also nice to have a P.I who isn’t a former alcoholic/ divorced mess of a man. In the end I wish some answers were given about Johnny etc."
The One That Came Back
"What a humdinger of a story. I felt like I was flying by the seat of my pants the whole time. There was only one thing missing that would have made this five stars. What ever really happened to Johnny? The dead child that was supposed to be him, turned out to be a girl. We never find out and that's what is wrong. IMHO I think it could be written into the final conversation in the cemetery. Also we never find out the connection to the pictures found inside of the cigarette box. It doesn't take much to figure out what happened to fake Johnny though. Jack killed him. Everything else makes it a blockbuster. I will definitely want to check out your other stories.🌹"
The One That Came Back
"Thanks you for this interesting story. "
The one that came back
"Interesting and great story, "
good read
"This story is very interesting but does need some work. I suggest to go over the sentences and see if it makes sense in the technical sense. But overall a great idea of a story."
Dark and Lurid
"Interesting piece. The descriptions were powerful at first, but soon wore thin - I found myself skimming through them within a few chapters. A little more variation in tone and level of detail would put this a little closer to J.D. Robb in style, which I would welcome. The characters were well put together. The plot was clever, with revealed details coming out in an increasing pace. I didn't find the end compelling, because I didn't have a strong anchor to the family at the center: if Peggy or one of her relatives were more sympathetic characters, perhaps? This is not my favored genre, but a little tweak and polish would make this a strong story."
Good and Bad
"When I think mystery I think and mostly read Sherlock Holmes, Poirot, and Miss Marple or I watch Midsomer Murders and Lewis. This book is not those. However, that being said, I did think it was a good book. The descriptions and characters drew me in so I wanted to keep reading and find out what was going on. The story line is good, and the characters seem to be well thought out and fleshed out. The only thing I would say needs work is consistency in POV, and the changes. Sometimes the changes were rather abrupt and could get confusing and with the POV changes it was also confusing as I wasn't always sure who's pov I was following. Otherwise it's a good mystery thriller book"
A Riveting Tale
"I love how this story managed to capture my attention from the very beginning. The way that it was written also painted a vivid picture in my mind as though I was seeing everything that was happening in real life. The grammar is a little spotty in places but not bad for a rough draft. A couple places are a bit too descriptive but not unbearable. Overall this a story that captures the attention of the reader from the beginning and holds it hostage until they unravel all the mysteries contained within. I can definitely say I would recommend this to others and may read it again."
TJK's Review
"I really enjoyed your first chapter. It captured my attention from the off and really hooked me. I was almost sorry it ended! I Really liked your use of imagery to help me paint a picture in my mind and set the scene of the story. It flowed smoothly and the characters we meet are quite realistic and vivid. You write with such verve and swagger it seems like you are not even trying! I really hoped you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it. Honestly one of the best works on Inkitt I have ever read. Great Job! Sincerely, TJK"
Tyasr
"I liked the story so far because I like crime stories. The plot is good but unreal. The author jumped in his writing from one place to another which led to confusion. "
Good and engaging
"Good and engaging start. Detailed description. Emotional. "
The One That Came Back
"Okay story, kind of weird to me. I really did not get the ending. Kind of confusing too. But well written. makapueo65 "
The One That Came Back
"It was an okay story, but it needed a better ending with more detail"
Review
"This story is very confusing. Im not sure if the boy is actually the boy or not now. If he isnt, then who is he. And why does the family seem to recognize him. I want to know how he was really abducted and where he has been for 4 years. Im not so sure that i truly believe his story. I feel like his sixter needs to create a new life for him instead of repainting his old life for him. He isnt the same person he used to be so they need to start brand new and not try to pick up from where they left off 4 years ago. I think that this would make johnny feel more comfotable instead of everyone pushing him to remember things. "
The One That Came Back
"Right away I could tell that this book wasn't edited. One misspelled word stood out on the opening page: recognize spelled recognise With that being said, I continued to read and found other errors."
