What is your opinion?
Engaging
"This book is well-written and captivating. It's descriptive in ways to make you feel like you are the character inside the book. This book sucks you in and keeps you engaged to the point you can't put it down. A must-read for sure! Good job, author!👍🤩😍"
DICHOTOMY.
"This tale is so tense and amazing. Love it!"
T T
"I FEEL LIKE AN IDIOT REVIEWING MY OWN STORY!"
Goodness!
"I am in love with this story! It is so intense. Something fresh!"
Love it!!!!!!
"Its a new kind of genre i am trying. And the author nailed it!!!!!!Can't wait for more!!!!!!!"
A Binge Read.
"Classically beautiful writing paired with rich storytelling. Though I had been confused in the beginning, I realized that this had been the author's intention, well done, I was left intrigued and on the edge of my seat. I have praised this author for their beautiful introductions in the past and was pleased to discover a nearly completed work. Note. Even though there were some grammar mistakes and typos, I still gave the author five stars in the grammar category because I assume this is the first draft.*"
I am pleased ❤
"To be very honest this got me hooked up, got me wanting to read more and more chapters, you are doing a good job author, I will definitely recommend this to anyone. Good work 👏 "
Impressive
"I like the story, very intriguing. I love the way you write makes me want more. Every chapter caught my attention. I'll read more. Though I got a few mistakes, that's okay. Well done 🙂"
Recommended!
"This story is fantastic. I love how the author wrote about two characters who are similar, yet, different too. The concept is unique and creative, I love the suspense it gets in each chapter, and how Alex seems like such an innocent girl but at the same time she has a dark side to her. Can't wait for the encounter of both characters! I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to read something fresh."
Amazing
"Wow this novel is so much more intriguing and tense than I ever thought it would be. I was constantly on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait the the next chapters!!"
I'd recommend you to read it yourself cause I don't have words to describe this :)
"Do read it!"
A fascinating example for a psychological thriller.
"This story is so much intriguing. . . . . Like diverse characters, suspenseful storyline, complicated and contradictory thoughts and actions. . .. how it has bouts of heartwarming scenes, and then suddenly you are hit with a trauma or a mishap and plunged into a dark hole. As I read the story, I found myself spiralling into a dark abyss. One moment I would try to climb up.. . . But then another episode will pull me down.........the use of intricate and almost unexplainable human psychology and fluctuations of human thoughts has been so wonderfully employed in this piece.. . . . Just amazing."
Cool
"The story was magnificent. Gave off a dark feeling and some really good heart warming chapters. The story kept spiralling slowly into darkness as Alex gets poked and prodded from life. I've read up to the seventh chapter but I plan on finishing it. I'm surprised that it hasn't had more attention."
Thrilling
"It began slowly, but the story picked up as I read. I generally like the plot. I also like Alex, the main character. There are some technical issues. The punctuation of dialogue tags needs work. There are too many exclamation marks. Many of the dialogues beginning on another line are not put in quotation marks. It makes it hard to tell if it's dialogue or not. The description can get wordy (so many adjectives). Sometimes it makes me focus on the words rather than the story. There's also a lot of head hopping which makes it difficult to identify whose POV we're in. But looking past all these, I really like the story and I want to see how things turn out for Alex. She's an interesting character. "
Chapter 2 - Algorithm [Intriguing]
"Such great world-building--I could walk and think like Alex. The descriptions were so acute and frivolous at the same time, which was great. I liked the analogy of the character's life to paper laid flat and then crinkled, "the lingering smell of old books and bells..." phrase, and also the "Alexandra did not have a face" line. That being said, sometimes less is more. Try mixing longer sentences with short ones. Again, imagery was great at some points but overwhelming at others. Finding a nice balance is hard, but the author definitely can get there. I admire the way the author writes--it mirrors the chaos inside of Alex. A good chaos. There was just a few too many grammar mistakes (for example: "had flew" -> "had flown" "glancing sat" -> "glancing at"). Again, super confident the author can fix this, but the mistakes took me out of the story for a bit. I think my main suggestion for the author would be to focus on Algorithms. It is the name of the chapter. Maybe start the chapter with the lines that read: "Alexandra Bridgette lived her life by an algorithm..." Or something like that. Overall, great work!"
