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Zusammenfassung

All he wanted was the most beautiful girl in school to go to prom with him, he got his wish and he wouldn't be able to return it

Status:
vor 4 Jahren
Kapitel:
1
Rating
n/a
Altersfreigabe
16+

Chapter 1

It was almost prom and I still needed a date, I wanted to ask the most popular girl to go with me, she was beautiful and perfect in so many ways. I walked in the building seeing her walking my way, “hey, Scott right”, how the hell she know my names

“yeah that’s me”

“So I hear you wanted to ask me something”, I look back to see my friends all smiling looking at me, “yes, I do I would love to take you to prom”, she stood there as everyone started to look at us as I waited for her answer, “of course, I would love too”, she said kissing my cheek before walking pass me.


“oh my god congratulations”, my friend Zack said petting my back


“who knew this would really be happening”


“Its happening and were going to be there to see it all go down”, the school bell rung and we went through the day quick and easy with the only thing I could think about was her. I quickly went home telling my family, my excitement was a all time high, nothing like this ever happened to me, I always been surrounded by bad luck but today and tomorrow was going to be the best days ever.

I laid in my bed scrolling through her timeline as I could feel my heart drop into my stomach each time I seen a picture of her in a bikini, she really was a master piece so the question is. Why go to prom with me?, I thought about it all night putting my phone down falling asleep


I woke up to my alarm I quickly washed up before heading to my haircut appointment then to my mediocre and pedicure appointment which is something I never did but what if I get lucky tonight I didn’t wanna have dirty nails. I then went to go pick my shoes and earrings up before heading home for my sister to do something with my eyebrows and eyelids, “so were going to pluck them”

“What does that mean”

“Make you look great instead of good”, it took her about 20 minutes to pluck both of them as I looked at the time with it still being early, I called my friends to see how they were doing, “yall ready for tonight”

“Not going”

“Why is that”

“Just not my thing”

“Come on, Daniel its our last night to have fun together”

“Then after that college”, he had to think about it but knowing him it’s for easy to convince him to do something even when he didn’t want too.

8 hours later

Getting dress I wasn’t were a suit but a solid white long sleeve wedding shirt with the top three buttons missing showing chest with matching pants, everything was coming along as my family walked In behind me, “damn lil bro you look good”

“yes, he does”, my mother said

“thank you”

“No curfew tonight but be safe”

“I will”

“you want my gun just incase”, our mother slapped him as we all laughed as I turned around showing the whole outfit, “I need pictures before you leave”, she ran downstairs to take pictures of me on the stairs then with my two siblings as I got a text from diamond to come to her house, “alright, it’s time”

“Don’t damage my car, bro”, he said as he gave me the keys to his charger

“I won’t I promise”

“Location on”, my mother said as I walked out turning it on heading towards diamonds parents house, I saw that her parents wasn’t home and I was confused, I rung the doorbell as she came to the door looking amazing in a one shoulder sequined with Swarovski covering the whole dress, “you look amazing”

“Thank you, come in for a few minutes”, I walked in as she handed me a glass of water then she walked away as I downed the water since I could feel myself over heating and panicking, hopefully this night goes great. She walked back as I started to feel dizzy, I tried standing up but three people in black walked out catching me as I collapse.


30 minutes later

“wake up”, as I felt cold water on me as I looked down and was stripped to my underwear seeing her and the three mask figured, “you ready”

“Of course”, she walked over to me and whispered, this is why you never see my boyfriend again, she laughed grabbing a hammer and hitting my hands with them, dislocating all of my fingers, “next use the knife”, she grabbed the knives stabbing three in each thigh, “we don’t want him to bleed to death before we’re finished”, they handed her the gun as she shot me in both of my feet as I screamed as I could feel my body go numb, “please stop”

“You want it to stop”

“Yes, please”, “ok”, grabbing the nail gun with no hesitation with four clicks, the nails released into his head as his lifeless body sat there. The three mask men carried the body to their truck as they payed diamond the rest of her money. “see you in 3 months”

“see you then”, she don’t really know where they do with the bodies, she just does it for the millions of dollars they give her and when the cops go looking the bodies are never found but what she also didn't know his friends and family know where he went, will she get caught? Or will she lie about everything? no evidence no case.


Lass matthewuntamable26 wissen, was du von diesem Kapitel hältst!

Visionr07
Visionr07

Matt may u plz update this one

4 Jahre
larajames01
larajames01

i just finished your story and i seriously loved it the characters felt so real and every scene kept me invested i actually have a few ideas that might make it even better if you’re up for it

ein Jahr

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