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Broken Pieces

The story is at it's prime, but it's already playing with my heart strings! Can't wait to read more from you!

Intriguing!!

Your story is beautiful! I really enjoyed it, the dialogues and descriptions are all interesting and jolt curiosity, and the story has quite a fast pace, which I liked! Keep writing, awesome work! Love, Coffee

Beautiful!

Your world building is fantastic and your characters are so different and all so interesting!!! I love this type of fantasy and the well paced flows and dialogues make it all the better! Keep writing this, Its definitely going in my permanent list! Much love, Coffee

Needs more excitement!

Your writing is beautiful, your pacing and flow are all pretty awesome as well. But you need to add an x factor that will keep reader's reading. You need to offer them something other than just words and sentences! I hope you can do that with a bit of thinking :) I hope you all the best! -Coffee Beanz

Great plot, needs a bit of work!

I think you're doing really well with the characters and settings, but the story line is a bit forced, the dialogues don't seem very natural and there are various spelling and grammar errors. If you fix those things, it'll completely boost your story!! But great beginning for you! You just need to keep improving! Much love, Coffee.

Strong start!!

You're such a great writer, I feel like you've got everything down to perfection, the characters are great, the descriptions are awesome and the plot is thick!! I'm excited to see where this will go! Keep writing! Much love, Coffee

Out Of This World!!!

Your writing really takes me away, makes me imagine the unimaginable and makes me smile with every sentence even when it's not funny. I swear this is a masterpiece of fiction and the characters are the best thing about it, along with the plot!!! So intense and intriguing, can't wait to read more from you!!! This is absolutely beautiful! Keep writing, please! Much love, Coffee

Love and lust!

Your writing is so beautiful! I liked reading it, even though it's not exactly my type of thing, it was a strong start to the story, promising so much more than that. I think the dark turn was kind of unexpected, as he literally went back to the very place he wanted to escape from, losing meg in the run. But I'm hoping it only gets better from now onwards, especially with the plot line, I'm excited to see where this will go! Keep writing, love! Much love, Coffee

STEAMY!

The beginning really surprised me! I started reading and oh--there's an orgasm!! Haha, reading this was so much fun to be honest, and it was just super hot and steamy, and although I don't read stuff like that much, this was worth reading because it was written so so well!! Thanks to the writer, I really enjoyed this little piece of escape. It blew my mind how well you used descriptions and the flow and pace of the story were all perfect! Characters also are well built, although that can be even more improved with an arc. Can't wait to see some more romance bloom between these two, outside of the office too, of course :) Much love, Coffee.

SO GOOD!

Wow! You're so great at building up settings and places and characters, that I could vividly see everything through my mind's eye. I was really taken aback, but the setting is very realistic and so enjoyable to read, along with it's very different and very unique characters! I love interracial romances, and I feel like many people don't portray them in books so it's so rare to find any! But this was perfect and I can't wait for you to finish writing it so I can keep reading! Much love, Coffee.