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Stargazer

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Summary

A young alien girl dreams of adventure, but is confined to the home planet of her birth so she confides in her Best friend and her journal to keep her comfort. Till one day she desides to explore beyond the stares and stop being the stargazer and be the star explorer. wont you help and adventure too?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
7
Rating
4.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 The Reach for New Life.

Have you ever wondered what's out there? Being stranded in the stars? Seeing other planets and worlds? I do. And it fascinates me, the thought of another life form beside ours. We have legends of living creatures with two eyes and five fingers on each hand and foot, Hair growing out of their head and and sometimes face, some wear these weird torture devices on their face that make their eyes bigger and just looking at it makes me break out into laughter. Some are big and some are small, some are tall and some are short and some are just down right gorgeous whereas some are uniquely challenged as my Father says, But you know what I think? I think they are all beautiful. This species is known as the "Human" Race and by Jiyla I can't wait to meet them. Oh, where are my manners I didn't introduce myself, Hello my names Xenlia, and I'm an "Alien" as you Earthlings would say. I'm from the planet Clopteon and our species is called Clopteons. (for those humans who can't pronounce it is Clo-te-ons and Clop-te-on) We are a species dedicated to kindness and harmony. BORING! I'm a sixteen thousand year old girl who is so bored of her life on this planet I'd rather fight the Kloptiod. ( A giant squid like creature but instead of tentacles they have wings, claws and fangs full of poisonous venom.) We come in all sorts of different colors, shapes, sizes, and even genders. We have what's called a Mafema which is a male and female mixed together, but those people are extremely rare. I'm a female, with brown hair gold eyes grey-ish blue skin and i'm only about five feet tall. I write this journal in hopes that when I throw it into space that it finds another species or even the humans and that we may one day communicate or even make peace. I know a big wish huh, especially from a sixteen thousand year old girl but, a girl can dream right? well goodnight...Stargazer.

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Hello Stargazer. What are you looking for?  Good start.  I am intriged to see where this goes next.  

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The intro is solid, I can sense Xenlia will be a goofball when she arrives on earth. When she said she is 16,000 years old, I suddenly feel young! 😂😂😂

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