Chapter 1: The Birthday Summons
The air hung thick and wet, heavy with salt and heat drifting in from the Arabian Sea.
The sun blazed mercilessly in a cloudless sky.
Noor Ain Shahroshan stood at the edge of the construction site, taking it all in.
Her safety helmet pressed snug against her head.
A clipboard was tucked firmly beneath her arm.
The heat made the horizon shimmer, as if the desert, the cliffs, and the sea were all melting into one golden blur.
Around her, the cliffs of Koh-e-Batil rose like ancient sentinels.
To one side, the beach stretched endlessly, glinting.
To the other, the desert unfurled in waves of barren sand.
This was a land of extremes, and she had learned to measure herself against it.
The sun, the salt, the sand, the unrelenting wind—they were honest.
They did not hide their cruelty behind smiles or promises.
Only the cranes, the grinding machinery, the shouts of laborers disturbed the vast emptiness of sand, surf, and sky.
Every so often, the cry of a gull pierced the air.
She was the only female engineer on site.
She was also the only one who had stayed beyond a year.
Sweat trickled down her temples, leaving trails of dust and grit.
She wiped her face again and again, feeling the sting of salt in her eyes.
Beneath her helmet, the sun baked her scalp relentlessly, each minute stretching into a test of endurance.
Most male engineers requested transfers within six months.
The isolation, the brutal shoreline, the absence of comfort—they could not endure it.
Noor Ain had stayed three years.
She liked Zarkhaan.
There was honesty here.
The land did not pretend.
The cliffs, the sea—they were harsh, but predictable.
They did not hide danger behind beauty.
They did not smile while baring their teeth.
Here, she could measure things in straight lines: the distance to the horizon, the height of the cliffs, the depth of the sand under her boots.
Here, there were no facades.
Her phone vibrated.
The moment she saw the number, her shoulders stiffened.
“Assalam alaikum,” she said, voice flat, stripped of warmth.
“Beta,” the voice replied.
Thick.
Male.
Familiar.
“I am reminding you. Counting the days until your birthday.”
Noor Ain stepped away from the shriek of drills and the metallic grind of machinery.
She set her file down on a chair and adjusted her helmet.
“My leave will not be approved this time,” she said.
“Leaving a project for a birthday is not professional.”
Silence followed.
Broken only by the relentless crash of waves against stone.
“Your leave will be approved,” the voice said at last.
“Do I need to remind you that my name alone bends rules and protocols? It is tradition, Noor Ain. Your birthday belongs here.”
She said nothing.
“You are coming,” he continued.
“Tickets are being sent. Do not keep me waiting.”
Then the voice softened, slipping into something disturbingly affectionate.
“You are the apple of my eyes. These are the days I get—when you are where you are meant to be. In front of my eyes. In the place you truly belong. Take care.”
The call ended.
Noor Ain stood frozen beneath the sun, phone still pressed to her ear.
A familiar unease tightened her throat, coiling like a memory refusing to fade.
She felt it every time she returned.
Images flickered unbidden.
Colossal gates swallowing their car whole.
Etched pillars watching her pass.
Circular ceilings closing overhead.
Servants staring, as if she were something strange, misplaced.
Gardens beautiful yet inhospitable.
Fountains grand, but water too dark.
The women of the house were worse.
They pulled their sons away when she passed, eyes sharp with something between fear and disdain.
Only her parents—the ones who brought her there each year—were treated with respect.
And only one man ever seemed truly happy to see her.
Or at least, he performed it well.
The same man whose voice had just echoed through her phone.
She remembered crying as a child when the cake was brought out.
Balloons bobbing, gifts gleaming—mocking her terror with brightness.
She only stopped when her mother whispered prayers into her ear, pressed a glass of blessed water to her lips, holding it there until her breathing slowed.
As she grew, the dread sharpened.
It was no longer just a feeling.
It became a presence.
By her teens, she felt it the moment she crossed the threshold of that fairytale house—an invisible weight pressing on her chest, shadows brushing past her senses.
Her mother finally told her the truth.
Noor Ain was sensitive.
She could feel shifts in energy, read auras, hear echoes others could not.
Her world was small—just her and her parents.
They told her early that they were not her biological family, and that each year they had to take her back to the place where she belonged.
An obligation.
A duty.
“I do not want to go there,” she said once, before her twelfth birthday.
“My heart feels heavy. Shadows linger. I hate those birthdays, those lavish gifts. I hate everything about that house.”
“It is the deal,” her mother replied gently.
“This is the only time he is allowed to see you. You belong there, but you were raised here. He knew you would not have survived childhood in that house.”
“Why you, Ammi?” Noor Ain asked, voice breaking.
“Why did he give me to you and Baba?”
Her mother’s hand rested on her head.
“Because I know how to protect you. And because your father is the only man he has ever trusted.”
A smile meant to reassure.
A sharp metallic clang from scaffolding jolted Noor Ain back to Zarkhaan.
The desert.
The sea.
The cliffs.
Nothing had changed.
The cycle was beginning again.
She walked among the half-built towers, the skeletal frames of concrete and steel, noting the uneven cement, the crane operators signaling to one another, the laborers hauling beams under the punishing sun.
Each detail was a distraction, a way to avoid thinking about the inevitability of October 22nd.
Noor Ain remembered the preparations of her birthdays there—the silver trays, the perfumed hand towels, the line of servants .
She remembered the hush that fell over the halls when she walked past, the air thick with expectation and something else, something darker, just below the surface.
She had always felt it, even when her parents were near—an invisible scrutiny, a judgment that weighed heavier than any physical presence.
Even now, years later, the anticipation of it made her chest tighten.
She could feel her pulse quicken as she imagined the doors of the house swinging open, the marble floors gleaming, the heavy drapes casting long shadows that stretched toward her like fingers.
She wondered if she had grown accustomed to it, if experience had dulled the fear.
But no, each year it returned, fresh and raw, as if she were a child again, stepping into that gilded cage.
Noor Ain adjusted her helmet and walked along the scaffolding, the wind carrying the faint scent of seaweed and salt.
She could almost hear the echo of her younger self, sobbing into her mother’s hand, whispering prayers for safety.
Her fingers curled around the clipboard as if it were a talisman, a small piece of reality she could hold onto when the memories became too vivid.
In some ways, the construction site felt honest, like Zarkhaan itself—brutal, but without pretense.
Here, she knew her position, her limits, and her boundaries.
The house, however, offered no such clarity.
Its opulence hid shadows, and every polished surface was a mask.
Her phone vibrated again, though she did not answer.
She did not need to.
The call had already reminded her of everything she had been trying to forget.
She let it rest in her pocket.
Noor Ain’s gaze drifted to the sea, where the waves rolled endlessly, crashing against the cliffs in rhythmic defiance.
She envied them their simplicity.
They did not demand obedience.
They did not judge.
They did not expect her to play a part she had never wanted to perform.
And yet, she knew she would go.
She always went.
She would step across the threshold, offer her measured smile, accept the presents, and sit through the ceremonies.
The tradition demanded it, and the one who demanded it had power she could neither challenge nor avoid.
October 22nd was coming.
And no matter in which corner of the world she ran—Malaysia, the desert, the coast—she would be drawn back, summoned to play the part of the Good Birthday Girl.
She was once told that it was her destiny, her heritage, and her duty.
She stayed, standing at the edge of Zarkhaan, waiting for the inevitable pull of tradition to reach her once more.
Author’s Note
Who is the man whose “name alone bends rules,” and what is the true source of his obsession with Noor Ain’s presence?
If her father the only man this mysterious figure has ever trusted, what shared secret binds a humble engineer to a man of such terrifying power?
Why do the women of the house look at her with a mixture of fear and disdain—is it because of what she is, or what she is destined to become?









A compelling start!
Good start. The writing is fluid and well-structured.
I decided to sample this novel since the description mentioned high-tech technology abd corporations which is a topic I'm working on now. I haven't reached the 'tech' part yet, but Noor is certainly an interesting character with seemingly a dark destiny. I would like to learn more. 👍