Prologue.
The chessboard was older than the empire it served.
Ivory and onyx pieces stood in perfect formation under the low light of the Feroci-Tanaka manor, their shadows stretching like accusations across the polished mahogany. The air carried the scent of aged cigar smoke, gun oil, and the faint metallic tang of old blood—remnants of twenty years of war dressed as marriage.
Reiko Tanaka Yamazaki moved her final pawn with surgical grace. It crossed the board in silence, reaching the last rank. She lifted the fallen Queen and placed it atop the promoted pawn.
“My pawn has become a Queen,” she whispered, her voice a blade wrapped in silk. “And she will checkmate your King.”
Don Gaetano Feroci leaned back in his chair, scarred knuckles drumming once against the armrest. His eyes—predator’s eyes—gleamed with dark amusement and something far more dangerous: recognition.
“You would weaponize a girl who doesn’t even know the game exists?” he rasped.
Reiko’s smile was small, lethal, and maternal in the most terrifying way. “I will take a nobody from the dirt. I will forge her in fire and silence until she is Kaizer’s equal. Until she is the only piece on this board capable of ending you. Give me my son and the divorce, Gaetano. Or watch everything you built burn when my Queen takes your throne.”
Gaetano studied the board. The promoted Queen now dominated the center, radiating threat. Somewhere across the world, in a humid dojo under a copper sky, a fifteen-year-old girl with a long black braid and cynical eyes finished a kata that looked more like rehearsal for murder than sport.
She had no name on the board yet.
Only potential.
A pawn.
But pawns, as every master knows, are the most dangerous pieces of all. They move forward with nothing to lose. And when they reach the other side...
They become Queens.
Years later, the board would be soaked in blood and champagne. A scarred King would hunt a sharp-tongued Queen who refused to yield. Allies would become enemies, enemies would become assets, and the lines between obsession and destruction would blur into something addictive and fatal.
The game had begun the moment Reiko promoted that pawn.
And the girl who would one day be called both Maya and Lola?
She was already walking into the trap, braid swinging like a pendulum counting down to war.
Check.
The King was watching.
Mate?
That remained to be seen









I don't even know how to explain this feeling... but this prologue already has me completely hooked. 😭✨
From the very first lines, it feels like I'm stepping into a world where every word carries weight. The atmosphere is so rich, mysterious, and cinematic that it honestly didn't feel like I was reading a prologue—it felt like the opening scene of a prestige fantasy drama.
The title "The Pawn and the Queen" already made me curious, but this introduction raised even more questions in the best possible way. I love stories that trust readers enough to slowly unfold their mysteries instead of explaining everything at once, and this prologue does exactly that. It builds intrigue while making me eager to discover the deeper meaning behind every choice and every character.
Your writing flows beautifully, and the pacing kept me engaged from beginning to end. There's something elegant about the narration that makes every sentence feel intentional. I could vividly picture everything in my mind, which is one of my favorite things in a story.
I'm already wondering:
👑 Who is truly the queen?
♟️ Who is the pawn?
Or... are the roles going to change as the story unfolds?
If this is only the prologue, then I can already tell the journey ahead is going to be unforgettable. I'm genuinely excited to keep reading and see how all these threads connect.
Amazing start, author! Wishing you lots of readers because this definitely deserves more love. I'm off to Chapter 1 now! ❤️📖