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The Sorceress Queen and her Mates
"More updates please"
Absolutely loved
"There are so many things I was just like "wow this writing". It's powerful and a must read I couldn't put it down its awesome!!! "
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"Loving the flow of the story. It was definitely a page-turner! I couldn't stop but keep reading till the last chapter updated but it was amazing and up to what I was looking for! Sweet romance, not an inferior heroine, somewhat erotic and most importantly their character construction was excellent! Looking forward to know more about Arian as well. Keep it up! "
The sorceress queen and her mates
"I love how the sentences flow and im always captivated about what's going to happen next🥰🥰"
I'm looking forward to more chapters
"I loved the plots as well as the characterisation of characters in this story. I read it all at once as it was a page-turner. The storyline is unique and the summary was written well because it made readers want to read on instead of just adding the book to their reading list. I must applaud the author's creativity and talent for writing this awesome story. There were just a few grammatical and punctuation errors here and there. Other than that, five stars!"
A brilliant storyline
"Really enjoyed reading this story so far.. A really intriguing plot, compelling characters with a lot of interesting dialogue and some rather engaging plots. A really great read from a talented Author! "
REALLY GOOD :)
"This was AMAZING, I'm really impressed! The plot was great and just overall I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait for more content from you <3"
Beautiful Blossoming
"Reading this felt like I was in my own romance, my own adventure, catching up with my own "past life." I really liked the switching of perspectives and how you told the readers in the beginning. I think the POV's add a level of originality to the book, just because it's so rare. If I had to critique something, I would probably note the small grammar mistakes in each chapter. I struggle with grammar too, so I think I could suggest a small solution: reread your chapter out loud, either to yourself or someone else, and you might be able to catch some of them. It works for me sometimes, so I thought it might help. Anyway, I think this a perfect book, and I feel like I can see your personality through the book itself."
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"Love it. Keep up the good work 💖💖"
Good job!
"Sooo I couldn't leave the book before I read all the available chapters. I'm so excited for the upcoming chapters, and can't wait to read them. As for criticism, I told you what you should work on in the comments. But Overall, the story is fantastic, and you are doing an amazing job.💕 "
Going good
"Looking forward for it already! Te best thing is grammar as I'm a grammar nazi and absolutely loved the plot"
Review
"It is a really good story and I absolutely love led it. "
Amazing
"I've never actually tried werewolf genre but I might say phew! Thank God I chose this book. Really like the whole sarcasm and strong characters ✌"
Good job!
"I've never been a fan of reading this kind of plot but surprisingly enough, the book kept me in its little hands, pushing me to continue reading. Although, there are some grammatical and punctuational errors, it's still readable and as for the POVs written when switching characters, it's a good addition. I do feel like the characters are moving too fast, though. 😂 But that aside, it's a good book! A little tweaking and I'm sure it'll be a polished diamond! 👍"
Good Job!
"The writing style is really good! I love the book so far. Characters have a unique taste to them. The plot is good so far. It's interesting. The story is moving a little too quickly. Give characters time before they get intimate. Little work is required on grammar and punctuation otherwise overall the story is interesting and I like it. Waiting eagerly to read further. "
Swooning
"Good start to a swoon worthy novel. If you like the traditional characters of Alpha, new girl, etc, then you’ll like this. Needs some work technically, but does not hurt readability too much! Good job! "
Amazing story
"I am hooked by your plot, I really want to know what she is and if she will keep both her mates. Your writing style is nice to read too, you only need to check for some typos as there are a lot of them. Also, don't add a third person view if it doesn't add anything. The switch from first to third can be confusing sometimes. Another tip is to go jnto more depth, deseibe what they feel, if their heart quickens which feelings are seen in their eyes. It gives the character more personality too. But overall it's an amazing story and can't wait till next chapter."
The Sorceress Queen and Her Mates
"I'm adding this to my reading list and no one can stop me from doing so! I love how distinct the characters are when switching their points of views and am extremely grateful for you labeling when you are switching those points of views. It makes the story extremely easy to follow. As of pacing, I like it a lot! It's not going too fast or too slow. However, there are a lot of punctuation errors and only a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed or anything that disturbs the flow of the story. There were also many words that could have been replaced such as "stuff" when referring to a certain amount of items. Also, in the first chapter, try not to make mentions of a character's pigmentation too redundant. But other than that, the story is beautiful and I love Azure as the kind of person she has been constructed to be, and the same goes for Rayan. There can be some serious chemistry going on between these two and I urge you to continue along the path your carving for their relationship and I don't doubt there will be a lot of drama going on!"
Good so far
"I found this book whilst going through the groups you were posting on, and I couldn't help but want to give it a read. I like the book, the plot overall is good, I am wanting to read more. My only hangup is that the POV's can be a little confusing, going from 3rd POV to Azure's POV within the same chapter confused me a little as I did not know what I was reading. The second chapters line spacing was all wrong and it was really hard to read, it's a little nitpicking but I'm a sucker for good grammar and formatting. Overall, I really like the idea, I think it could be great if you were to go through it with a fine comb and fix all the line spacing and punctuation issues that it has. Please do not take this review as me saying the book is bad = in no way. But use it as constructive criticism in order to improve!"
Meh (the honest review you’re looking for)
"Not terrible, don’t get it twisted the book has great potential but it needs major editing consisting of spell checks, plot holes, lengthening the chapters so moments don’t seem rushed. It’s ok in all "
