What is your opinion?
The chosen one
"We thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is unusual to see so much of the scene set in one confined place, particularly so early on in a story, but it works very well in this tale, and helps to mould that character's strong spirit. The ending felt a little contrived, although we do understand the desire for retribution given what the main character suffered. Lots of well portrayed emotion, tempered with the unrelenting force of character and her occasional humour. Written exceptionally well, with excellent grammar and punctuation, which is always important to us. We can recommend this story, which is not something we usually do."
great storyy
"i have never read the books of this genre and the author really made me want to read more of it definitely it will be in my fav book list the characters are super cool and interesting I am looking for more author"
LOOOOVE!!!!
"Ok so overall I love it and not overall I still love it. I'm not a big fan of science fiction but this book is amazing and it changed my perspective of this genre. I read this book in two days straight none stop and I literally can't wait to read the second book. ( I'm already reading it)."
Seriously amazing
"This book is amazing... I felt every sting, every punch, every hurt, everything lols, even my heart raised on some occasions... Nothing wrong with the Grammarly or Punctuation... The author's style of writing is flawless and although some parts could be modified to sound more realistic... like the scene where they punch and shoot them... perhaps showing what happens and not telling us would sound realistic... and the part where she felt the needles... showing and don't tell Overall... This book is AWESOME lols I will continue to read and update the review as the book goes on 😁🌹🤗 Keep writing and happy writing..."
Awesome plot!!
"The story concept is amazing. The dialogues are written beautifully and feel natural. However, there should be some variations to the writing style and there are also some technical which I'm sure would be rectified by editing. But I must mention that I feel some paragraphs are contradicting. Then again, it all will be gone after rigorous editing (after all, it's the first draft). Overall, I enjoyed reading the book and it's a must read!! Keep Writing!! ❤ ❤"
The Chosen Ones
"This book is one of the best books I have ever read, no joke. It's utterly captivating and one of the most addictive books I've read in a while. It was really engaging and exciting and I loved the mix of romance in it. I want to keep reading more of it because it has my attention, which anyone who knows me good... knows that very few books keep me wanting to read more. These characters will live in my heart and mind, or any reader's, long after I have read the last line. Keep up the amazing work and continue to write more stories, because you are an outstanding writer!"
Science fiction!
"It's a science fiction which thrills me for it is my favorite genre. I really enjoyed living it and the writing style was beautiful. I can't help but wonder if this can be our near future. "
Nice
"The plot is enchanting and the author's writing style and descriptive skills are mesmerizing. The dialogues are also fluent and believable. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! 🙌"
The chosen ones.
"I found the book to be captivating with a fascinating plot. It is easy to read the characters were interesting. "
Captivating
"I love the slow-building plot and mystery in this novel. The plot is intriguing and very unique. The characters are all relatable, with distinct, likeable personalities. I love how the plot slowly builds, dropping hints of what’s to come and creating a sense of suspense as the book goes on. As for the writing itself, it was very detailed and clear. As for suggestions, I felt that it might be a good idea to use the "show, don't tell" method for some of the backstory, settings, and details (mainly in the first portion of the novel). I also felt that there could have been a bit more emotion in the narrative. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this! I'm curious to see what happens next."
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Soso
"We hen I started reading this book I was looking forward to some trilling adventure something different as and new not very entertaining just want to see what if I was wrong"
A beautiful story!
"This is a fascinating Sci-Fi that takes the reader on a journey! The dialogue is so rich and realistic that it immerses its audience with ease. The plot is original and succulent, reminiscent of modern-day literature. It will certainly take Inkitt by storm! The style is unique and flawless. It has the most well-defined style that I have seen thus far on this site. The grammar is smooth and easy to read. There were very little errors. Overall, a very good story and I can't wait to see where this goes!"
I didn't like it at all
"The novel had an unnecessary hype and my expectations were totally shattered regarding this book. Would not recommend to anyone. By the way, this is completely my opinion. No offense to anyone. But the author did good work it's just me who did not like it. Though, all the best for future work. "
