What is your opinion?
Xavier Rose
"Suitable for teenagers"
Xavier 's rose
"Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Xaviar’s Rose
"Love it can’t wait to see more "
Absolutely love it
"I just enjoyed it so much and I want to keep reading "
Xavier's Rose
"This story is amazing! I really enjoyed the chapters in which they were children in the beginning, because it really helps to set up the characters! Now, the characters are not necessarily grown ups, but older, and because of the fact that you wrote about them as children there is such a deeper understanding of the characters! This story is just marvelousl, I haven't been able to find many high school werewolf romances that retain innocence in a sense (at least so far), allowing plot and character development, and you have really done a miraculous job. Please, pretty please with a cherry on top, update this story!!!!😇😊🙏🍒🍨🍦"
Things just got more interesting!
"Okay, I just finished reading this on wattpad and I couldn't hold myself from commenting every now and then!😅 This is SO ADORABLE! Their childhood moments are incredibly sweet and as they've grown up, things have turned much much more intense! I kinda felt that the kids sounded too mature for 7 year olds so it was a little confusing at times. Personally speaking, I think you need to mostly show their activities instead of saying the things running in their heads as kids are usually impulsive rather than logical. Also I spotted a few grammar errors, tensewise but other than that, I love it! And now that they're older, I can't wait for more. I'll surely follow this story in wattpad!"
Great Story
"This story is a great read. The plot is much like other werewolf books I’ve read, but definitely has enough of a twist to reel you in. I also like getting to read from both Xavier’s and Rose’s POV. Great job!"
Magically perfect
"The book is actually interesting and something that I would definitely read. Given me not being into this werewolf genre, this one caught my attention easily and I'm glad that I read this. The author has skillfully weaved the readers into this beautiful world. Great job author. Keep up the good work and all the best!!! 🙌🙌"
Definitely Intriguing
"I loved the storyline. I like how you engage your characters. Your grammar construction is good, the plot is captivating. You have a way that leave readers yearning for me. Apart from the flow of the story, it will definitely make for a very good read. Keep it up!!!!!"
Interesting Story
"Love the story structure. I won't lie at first I got confused lol but i got it. Like the pace and development on the story. Love the love and its a nice story, if this continues it will develop nicely. Hope to see more XX"
Unique Storyline
"First, please don't stop writing. This is a good start and I know if you keep going, it will be fabulous. The story line is unique. I like the pace you tell the story. It gives the reader time to understand the plot and imagine what is going on. Good use of your descriptive terms. It heightens the tone and creates an environment instead of just reading words of a story. I am ready for more chapters. I am going to add you on my list! I read in the other comments that English isn't your first language. I am so impressed with what I see. There are areas where you change tense in the sentence. The first part would be in past tense using words like "had" "was" "went" and in the same sentence the tense switches to active. English is a hard language to learn especially since verbs in English are completely different. I would suggest when you are done go to fiverr.com or another site and have them edit your book. This will allow you to publish your works without worry of this area. The more you write, the better you will get at this so DON'T STOP WRITING!!! One more thing. I love the cover design!"
Love it!
"I love the storyline and the flow in general. I would have preferred the flashbacks to be the prologue instead of insert. But everything else is great"
Xavier's Rose
"I would just like to say, from when I first started reading your book to now, I can really see growth in your writing as well as your formatting. There really aren't any issues I found other than the ones I have stated in the comments and even without those, I can see how much you improve. This is your first book and, as you mentioned earlier, English isn't your first language but your writing is honestly very nice and you don't really see any spelling errors that are distracting. This story has a lot of potential just as you do as an author, and I can see how much heart you put into your work and how these are characters you love and cherish. I also really appreciate the bit of a backstory you have to Xavier and Rose, though I must admit I was a bit unsure about their kiss being that they were children even though I do understand it was innocent, so this is just a nitpick of mine. There were some adorable scenes between the two and I'm so excited to see how they pick up where they left off when they meet again as adults! Again, your story has an unbelievable amount of potential and you, as an author, are quite capable of not letting those opportunities to create a unique story slip from your grasp. My last piece of advice would be to continue pushing your limits and growing as a writer because I do believe you have a bright future if you continue striving towards your goals. Amazing work!"
Love it 100% should read
"I loved everything about the book most like will read again"
Xaviers rose
"Good but a week ending need fit her "
Xavier's Rose
"I liked the fact that the protagonists connected from their childhood. However, the plot is a bit slow and it feels like the book is going to be really long without giving many cliffhangers and surprises to keep the interest. Grammar and punctuation needs work, too. Maybe grammarly could help. Keep up the hard work!"
