What is your opinion?
Very nice...
"A very food book... interesting storyline, very good character building, all over a it's really good... however a sad and interesting ending... feel like a sequel will happen so will wait for it... so bring it soon... And you are really good writer, have potential and talent so keep doing... definitely like to read more from you"
Worth Reading
"I loved it, very intriguing and addictive. You know how to grip the attention of any reader. Only issue was the grammar and spelling in few places. A thorough go through and editing will be good. You mixed up tenses in few places. Thats all. Other than that, it was a very nice story. Keep writing! Good luck"
Loved it.
"This book is so interesting, I couldn't help but turn each page as I read on. Haven't finished it yet but I already love the story, can't wait to know more."
Unique
"I like that it is different than most of the stories I have read. The plot is interesting and would love to read more from you. Some grammatical mistakes here and there but overall well written👍👍"
Really exciting!
"I’m only a couple chapters in but it’s already proved to be very interesting and exciting! The adventure element to it is very suspenseful and makes you want to read more. Its enjoyable to read as there are so many new ideas and fun characters being introduced! Overall, I’d say it’s a very exicting read :) "
Mysteriously captivating
"Well I'm halfway up this book so far. But I'll definitely be going back to it as soon as I write the review. Starting from the things I loved about your book, I loved the plot, which is the most important thing in any story. It's quite unique and you've added a touch of mystery and adventure here that captivated me right from the start. The writing style is good but I feel that it could do much better with some editing. I felt like some phrases could be said better than what you've written. Like, for example, it would sound better if you used 'told', 'answered', 'announced', 'commented' and such similar verbs instead of the verb 'said to' as used in multiple places. Story wise, like the other readers have commented, I, too felt like there were some 'blank spaces' in the first few chapters. However, things started making sense as I reached further. I found some grammar errors regarding tense and sentence structuring and a few typos. Another thing I want to add (forgive me if I'm coming out as too harsh but I just want to give an honest review) is maybe you might want to shiw the characters' emotions more openly. Personally, infect like there were a lot of dialogues between the characters but quite a few sentences indicating their internal thoughts and feelings. Those internal emotions can help the readers truly feel the characters and what they're going through. Anyhow, I know that this story has a great potential with it's unique and intriguing storyline and captivating plot. So it's definitely a five star for me. I'm going to restart my reading from here and binge read it till finish. I hope my review helps! Overall, kudos to the author! Keep writing! Best wishes!❣❣ "
Wonderful!
"I love this book, you have done an amazing job showing your creativity. Some grammatical errors here and there but all things considered this is a really good read. Can’t wait to read more from you! Xx Belle 🌻💛"
The story
"So the book plot is amazing because personally I am up for all things nature and earth related. I like innovative books that come up with things like cures and technology the real world doesn't have yet and this books has that so... LOVE. There are a few grammatical errors but the author can fix that so overall the book is captivating. I am not finished but what I like the most is the names of the characters, very cultural. "
Wow 🌟
"I love 💖 it I love how the story runs and I enjoyed reading it. You’re a great author great👍"
Refreshing
"The flow of the story is very interesting. There are different mistakes grammatically but it does not affect the story at all. The book is very much promising and has a large potential. "
Must Read
"Interesting plot and good idea! "
Very Nice...
"Very moving !! Interesting plot... Must read!!"
Its good!
"I enjoyed reading your book for it has potential! You really do deserve all of those 56 reviews you got! :) I love the plot and all of the ideas you had on making this book I will love to get updates on what your doing on your books! Keep writing! 10/10 cool book! P.S A review and comments on my books would be very nice as well!"
Review
"Hello, sorry that I took long to resposnd to your text I was reading your story. It was lovely and I would recommend this to other readers. Keep Writing! "
Love it
"Took my time reading the story and it was worth it. I love the way characters were established. Can't wait for what's next"
Agni
"A different kind of story than what available on Inkitt A wonderful book Eagerly waiting for your next book"
Angi: the Secret Door
"Keep on writing! I love your story development, it is fast paced and you present interesting characters. Your plot and ideas are original which is something I love. I enjoyed it overall, and will keep reading! However, a quick note: you do have some sentences that need a little work, but I did not find that it "took away" from the story overall. Your writing and complexity of writing improves as I read on, and you create really interesting/realistic dialogue. My final thought: I recommend this story to anyone who craves to read something different and unique. I look forward to reading more of your work!"
Agni
"Great work from an intelligent gentleman. If you have a small knowledge of the classics philosophy, ancient myths, you are in for a treat. This book is not from an English origin so technically not so good, but all it needs is a good editor. "
Interesting
"It was a very interesting story."
Eye opening
"Really interesting."
