What is your opinion?
An amazing chapter
"I liked everything in this chapter,the author has managed to shift my mind from all the other novel I've been reading to this one."
Good
"If was good "
Good
"It’s only one chapter since I left a comment on this story. There’s nothing more to add after just one chapter."
Captivating
"What a wonderful story. I liked the fact that, the auther has kept the aliens and their planet almost human like. And please dear auther we are waiting eagerly for the story to continue.. "
It's really good!!
"I really loved how it had me glued from the beginning and the letter was intriguing. I can't wait to read more it's one of the best I've read in a while"
Very good story and writing!
"I'm quite into the story so far. Oragon seems like a very intriguing planted and I'm very interested on wanting to know more about it. The writing style is very well written in a way that makes reading through immersive, and I thought the journal and the language it was written a very cool idea. The characters are really well written out, they seem to each have their own, quirks, flaws and such. Overall, I like this story and I recommend this to anyone, who wants a fresh fantasy story that's quite unique in its own way."
Review
"The Beginning of the story has already caught my attention, your writing style are amazing and just reading your story have on my seat now. Well Done."
Oragon is a very neat world and I like to know more!
"I really much enjoyed what you written so far. Very descriptive writing that I'm quite drawn in the story. Especially on wanting to know more about Oragon, it's world, it's magic and such. You also have a pretty good writing style, simple and easy to follow through and I thought the the journal from Maya's great great aunt, the way its been written was a pretty neat way of a written language in the 13 century. Overall, It's a really neat story and I would definitely want to know more about it. Good job, so far. "
Maya’s Hope for Oragon
" Maya loves history, especially the intriguing secret that she has discovered while reading letters from her ancestors. Yet this is not enough to impress her imposing father who believes that young women should only engage in careers that doesn’t involve studying or reading books. Torn between pleasing her father and also satisfying her deep thirst for knowledge, will Maya learn to accept herself without her father’s approval as well as discover the amazing secret of Oragon? This is an awkward name for me to spell correctly, but Scholarstica5858 is a talented writer with a strong, narrative voice. Her characters are fully three dimensional unlike the characters I’ve read from some other books that were flat and uninspirational. This is another author I wouldn’t be surprised to discover published works outside of Inkitt some day. Probably not with that particular pen name though. Lol! "
So cool
"I think I should write a scifi story, you just inspired me. This is so cool and awesome lve the story structure. Well done. It's an interesting story something diffeerent. Keep it up!"
Loved it!!
"You captured my interest since the beginning and the whole time the way you write is truly beautiful. All I can say is I cannot wait to read more. Big hugs and keep it up ❤"
Nice
"I have read the first two chapters and I have to say I love your story. Can't wait to complete it"
All Fives
"I am not good at giving reviews but I hope this helps. Here we go. The blurb/ summary of the story is so inviting. I rarely read fantasy but I think its a brave choice for the author. The names and titles you came up with are so fitting and easy to remember. The plot of the story also seems well laid, can't wait to see how the entire story plays out."
An addictive read.
"I don't think I have words to describe your narration. They are totally swoon-worthy. And the plot is so fresh and unique. The characters are well rounded and the scenes that you are setting are so vivid that I can almost feel myself in there. You're doing an amazing job and I'm really looking forward to the updates cause this got me so hooked. All the best!"
An interesting read.
"The story is quite intriguing as being very Interesting. I thought the whole Oragon being a whole other planet, process with magic crystals, immortality and such was a very cool way of going about it. Though I'm not entirely sure what the plot is going to be about as I'm aware this isn't finished yet, what I read so far has piqued my interest on wanting to know more about it. The characters are written in a good way, that don't make them seem written as flat/one-dimensional, which some beginner writers have a problem on writing good characters, that make them grow and change overtime. Your writing style is simple, yet good at being descriptive, especially the characters. Any mistakes that comes from spelling or grammar, isn't anything major that discracts from the story. Overall, I think it's a great read and I would recommend this to anyone who likes a fantasy with some sci-fi mixed in. Good job on writing this story. It really has a potential of being a good novel. 👍🏻"
SciFi with Epic themes
"Looks like you're off to a great start. The lore is being built step by step. There is foreshadowing here and there that you must have placed on purpose. The pacing speed is just right. I felt like it's a bit of a slow-burn and I like the part that politics and revenge is introduced early on. It seems that it is a major driving factor of the over-all plot. Since it's not yet done, I'll give it the benefit of the doubt since the first chapters are promising. However, I'm not sure if it's just me but I have a challenge in connecting with Maya. Then again, it's too early to tell. I'll give it time before she's given the heroine personality. Or perhaps she's a different archetype altogether. Keep the chapters coming! PS: The book cover is professionally done! It's looks awesome. Definitely en eye catcher!"
An Heir For Oragon
"I love how descriptive you write your character's ! A work in progress im intrigued with, I have a billion questions. But I will leave no spoilers or ask for any. Her relationships were written well, I feel some possible real chemistry between The King and MC. I loved her brotherly love and how you wrote that.. Its just something I love reading. I would recommend this book 😍"
Fascinating and Well-paced
"this is a lovely read so far! i'm 3 chapters in and i'm super hooked on this premise. it reads well and i would totally watch this as a movie - think sort of interstellar but with extraterrestrial life and hints of arthurian lit. one thing i noticed is that i was reading maya, her brother and colin as much younger people that they actually are. i realized that maya is 23 (i think!) and i later forgot because she seems so innocent and the dialogue in context with her father seems more childlike. i totally see why the dynamic comes together since her father belittles her and ages her down, but i would say that adding a more serious thread of tension between the two would help demonstrate her maturity a little more. like instead of her being ultra-willing to get her father's approval, have her in ambivalence. this way the tension or resentment built into their relationship will feel more grown, if that makes sense. on the other hand i saw a few missing commas or misuse of commas in the place of semicolons. i also saw word choice or structural stuff that could be easily fixed but didn't impact reading too seriously (i left feedback!). but these are my only critiques! i enjoyed this read and your narration is lovely! the characters also feel very real! ya had me angry at good-ol Mack there for a hot minute haha. overall, amazing job!"
Great book so far
"I am liking the story plot so far. It's just getting super interesting. Who is Maya really? Can't wait to find out. "
Attention grabbing
"This story grabs your attention from the start. The plot is great so far and the pacing is good. I can't wait to read more. "
