What is your opinion?
I love it and iam addicted to it can plz post others chapters also I am literally begging u plz
"I love it and iam addicted to it can plz post others chapters also I am literally begging u plz"
Flame
"Just love this novel, the way u differentiate the feelings between love & friendship is too good 💜"
Flame
"This book was AWSOME!! I got so addicted to fast and red it in two days!! "
i love this story ❤
"my eyes were filled with tears when i was reading jay and vian's journal.. i love this story ❤ "
Great
"I love the plot and characters of this story. The beginning was confusing but once i figured it out it was an amazing novel."
Very good
"This is very well written. I like the characters, I like how you capture their emotions in the book. At first I was worried it was going to bore me but it not bore me it kept my interest. I definitely will read more of this book I like to see where it goes. The author is very good with detail, almost like you inside the characters they their emotions are written. Amazing. "
You are my Flame
"Overall, i love the story, it's mellow and so poetic, not unlike your typical teen story, and the characters dynamic, the low point, well, it's a mellow and so poetic, sometimes teens not so much eager to read something that so melodramatic, unless they are not a teen anymore (like me.... Hahahaha). Uhm... Okay, overall, this story have soooo much potential, and of course more refined than my story grammar. 😭❤️"
Awesome story
"Pls update fast I m waiting . this novel is awesome"
Good
"Good story with well rounded characters. Definitely worth the read. "
A must read 👏👏👏
"This story is so well written, I felt everything that the characters felt and the descriptions of the scenery made feel like I was in the story. This was written so beautifully. I can’t wait to read more. ☺️😁👏👏👏"
Interesting
"A love story with pure sweetness. Interesting plot need to know more of it. Like the idea and the flow. Minor mistales that can be edited but Hey who doens't make at least a mistake. We learn and from that we grow. Kepp the good work and give it a lot of potential. It's a ncie swet story and iit got me off guard. Didn't expect it to be like this. well done and keep up the good work!"
You Are My Flame
"Great start. Chapter one had me on edge of my seat. The only thing I would suggest is instead of V and J write the whole name it was a bit confusing."
You are my flame
"Omg, you are officially my favourite writer on inkitt!!! I just love your imagination and the way you come up with new story, so far I am loving and can’t wait to see how you build it up! You are doing a great job! 💕"
Flaming Love Burns On ...
"What can you do when the one you love is no longer within reach? For that is what happened to Veda with his gorgeous best friend Ava. He remembers the look of her dark hair against her tanned skin, the way she wrinkled her nose when she smiled. How she wasn’t repulsed by spiders the way many girls were. Most of all, he remembers the touch of her hand when he led her through the school hall ways. How could she forget him so completely after her new found fame and fortune? His other friend Jimmy is rather relieved by Ava’s absence seeing her as a bit of a third wheel in their friendship. But as Veda stares into the night sky with it’s countless of stars, he knows he will one day see Ava again ...and his burning kiss will be enough to cause her to remember what they once shared together. I for one am very curious as to what happened to put Ava far from V’s reach. Did she become a rock star? A Hollywood actress? There was only four chapters at the time of this review but I hope Black Heart the author makes this information available soon in the upcoming chapters. Black Heart is also quite fond of poetry and cleverly weaves some of her/his works through out the story. A pleasant read especially if you enjoy poetic language. "
very entertaining
"I really enjoyed this story , and I am looking forward to future updates . I think the plot is very good . There was a lot of descriptive language used in this story , which I liked . The grammar was okay as well , but remember to prof read . Overall , I really enjoyed this story ."
Sweet story
"When I started reading this I didn't want to stop. There are a few things that need attention such as grammar, punctuation and spelling. Looking forward to read more chapters of your story. Keep up the good work. "
You are my flame
"It a eye catching stroy with nice dedication to romance and love and I really stunned by the beginning. So wish you luck and hope you will update soon... "
You are my flame
" This is interesting, well I love these type of stories. So, I added it in my reading list after just reading it's prologue, Hahaha. And wish you best of luck for all your works. "
You are my flame
"The story is good and has a lot of promise, however, I wasn't able to connect with the characters. I didn't feel the romance either, to be honest. I'd prefer if there was something else also at stake instead of some teenage love. The language felt forced at some points, and the narration stilted, not flowing naturally as they were growing up. In addition, it's too slow for me. You have 21 chapters describing the past, and nothing has happened yet to suggest why the friends broke apart. Perhaps when you get to the point of them reconciling and trying to forgive it'll be more interesting. Technically, there are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, but nothing major. Good luck!"
So Passionate
"The author loves their characters. The care is undeniable. The still-learning quality of the writing is also pretty clear, but we all learn as we go, and this author is going to go far. Some of the word choices are a little forced, and there's some minor grammar issues (although head and shoulders above many of his competitors!) and for my money I'd love for the Main Characters to have more at stake, a deeper desire than just Can I Fall In Love. But the passion cannot be denied, and if all you need is Love, you'll find it here"
