What is your opinion?
Complecity
"Great book"
Complexity
"Where is the ending of this story. I really don't like reading all of this good story, to have no ending. Very irratating!"
Complexity
"So ready for an update"
Great book
"Keep up the good book.😁 💚💚💚💚💚 It so much. Can't wait for the update"
Complexity
"This is one of the books I have enjoyed reading cna't wait for an update !"
Complexity
"Wheres the following up"
It is great at it's place
"when the story went too high I stopped cuz I am a kid. i will read it later when I got adult lol"
Complexity
"(read up until the end of chapter four) I love what I've read! The relationship between Olivia and Maverick is absolutely adorable, and it's clear that Olivia has taken single parenthood into her stride. And Maverick is just such a cutie pie!! I also love the fact that Olivia isn't at all jealous when her ex shows up at her family party with some blonde broad. Keep up the fantastic work! Sofia."
Complexity
"Book is great, different but excellent. "
Complexity
"I really love the story. Can't wait for the updates and what will happen next. Kudos to the author Shabbehdays 👍"
Marvelous
"Amazing story!"
Complexity
"I loved the characters and their personalities. It is intriguing to read this book. I hope the author completes the story."
Complexity
"I only read the first few chapters but this was a great novel. The writing style was wonderful, the technical skills were perfect and the plot seems interesting. The characters are very life-like and the interactions between them are realistic. The chapters aren't too long or too short, a great story overall. Keep writing!"
Complexity
"It's a really quick and fun read. The chemistry between the characters is amazing. The plot is good. Great Work! "
Complexity
"I think that Olivia having to give up Gabriel sucks. He should re-sign from the pack and tell Steven to kiss his ass. That being said I don't like the fact that I don't how many chapters are left in the book. Tell the app people to make it right"
Complexity
"You write really well, and your story is as fast-paced as it needs in order to keep the reader intrigued. However, I'd like to see more character building, especially regarding Colt, and have further insight into the world of the Japanese mafia. The latter, though, might come later as you continue the story. Keep up the good work!"
Easy/Fun Read
"You did a really great job with this story! The plot is thorough and quite complex. I would say the best part of this story is the mother-son relationship you introduced between Olivia and her son. It makes the story feel real and allows the reader to immerse themselves into the role of the charters, especially for those who are parents themselves. In regards to your writing style, I thought the way you described the thoughts and feelings of your characters was pretty thorough. I also enjoyed the way you wrote the same scene from the perspective of another character. I think it allowed for a sense of creativity and uniqueness to your writing. There are some punctuation and grammar errors, but nothing too overwhelming. I suggest, maybe, running your story through websites like Grammarly (free to use) to help with that. Overall, good job! Keep writing!"
It's a easy and fun read
"The whole love triangle thing—the romance, jealousy, and drama. Love it. 😉 And I love how Ollie is surrounded by family and friends who adore and cherish her. Loves her unconditionally. And the relationship between Mother (Ollie) and son (Maverick) just warms my heart. It's my favorite thing about this novel, apart from the whole Ollie and Gabe awkward and yet hilarious love story.😊 My only problem with this. I think that it's a bit rushed. So just slow down a bit and continue to go at it.🖒 But aside from that, it's a good read. I mean, I've been reading this back to back every chance I get.😆 Anyway, thanks for recommending this author. "
Great so far!!
"I love the plot of this story. Your characters really jump off the page and I love the complex relationships and interactions - it really helps the story come alive and feel real, so great job with that. I found Olivia to be a very compelling protagonist and she helped the story feel unique. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but for the most part, your writing style is good and easy to follow. Though, I think you could be a touch more descriptive just to immerse the reader in your story even more. For example, when Olivia is talking to her boss and her boss gives her a 'I'm proud of you' look - what about her face is suggesting she's proud of Olivia? I know you're using a form of shorthand to convey your point and it still works, but adding a bit more detail could immerse your reader in your story even more. Just as an example. But that's just me, I tend to go a bit overboard with descriptions sometimes, so take with that what you will. Overall I think you have something really good going on here and I really enjoyed reading through this. Great job :)"
complexity
"Hello, I am really liking your story so far, and your fluid way of writing. The characters are quite intense and interesting .It's difficult to guess what way they will go, keeping us guessing. I will review again further into the story. Keep writing. Well done."
