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Curiouser and Curiouser

"The author pulls you right into the story from the start, which I appreciate. About half-way, the story shifts and focuses on two other characters, but I wanted to learn more about those in the first half. It felt like there was so much more to that story. An intense read!"

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Wow

"That was thrilling like I could actually see everything going on and it was amazing. The plot was genius, I love this."

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It’s a mini saga

"It’s like reading a movie and I find that to be the best part about any book. The only thing I would recommend is maybe author should put in a trigger warming for some scenes. All in all, I love how bold and creative the author has been! "

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Good read!

"It has some grammar errors but I like it so far. Hope it gets better along the read"

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Fun read!

"I had a good time reading through this. It’s definitely within my favorite genre category—as romance is involved—but I often felt a bit lost. The pacing is kind of what threw me off. Some things were resolved too quickly, others weren’t resolved, and I began to lose track of where I was in the plot. There are definitely some grammatical issues and tense switches, but I don’t really mind that kind of thing if the characters and/or plot are good. I did enjoy it overall and I hope you continue to write! Let me know when you have any new works and I’ll drop a like and review. Thank you for sharing!"

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Nice read!

"the story plot is definitely something that will keep you engaged. Just make sure to use right punctuation in next update. Overall a nice, interesting plot."

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Nice book

"I like the effort the author put into this book. I also liked the characters as well. I notice some grammatic errors though, But aside that its a nice and enjoyable book."

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Outstanding book!

"I think that the best feature about it was the plot. It was so well-described and it could easily make the reader blend into the story. The character development and dialogues were all so good. There aren't any major grammatical mistakes in this book, which makes it easy to read. Kudos! to the author."

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Die Trying

"Annie doesn’t particularly consider herself a noteworthy person. Yes, she graduated from law school and married a multimillionaire to boot. But she’d still prefers to live her life under the radar. As far as Annie is concerned, the less attention she receives, the better. However, when the nanny forgets those all so important items for her daughter’s sixth birthday, Annie has no choice but to purchase them herself. She under dresses when she arrives at the mall, knowing her good looks often draws unwanted attention to herself. Unfortunately it isn’t enough to save her from Thomas Kronz, a dangerous man from her past. “What do you want?” She asks as Thomas as he traps her from behind, allowing the gun to trace the outline of her breasts. “Just a little revenge,” he replies. And Annie knows she is about to engage in the fight of her life. I do love the plot. Author Emmanuel Abraham promises us a harrowing story about the fate of Annie and her evil nemesis Thomas. I stopped after chapter four to write this review, but I plan on reading further. I did note some past/present tense issues and grammar concerns. But it’s nothing that can’t be ironed out with a little editing. Things do get quite intense between Annie and Thomas so I’d advise a trigger warning for those who are uncomfortable with rape. This was a fun read nonetheless. If adventure/thriller is your thing, you’ll be in for quite a ride. "

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Amazing!

"The story is captivating and keeps me hooked. The characters have extremely distinct personalities which I love, especially Annie. I kept on racing towards the end of the chapters eager to find out what happens next. The only issue I had was that there is a mix of past and present tense, but it's not that big of a deal. Keep on writing!"

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Really Interesting

"It's a very good story and the discriptions are realistic enough to make you feel as if all of it was happening in front of you. That is an amazing thing and I would like to suggest anyone that loves this genre to read it. Those book might not be for everyone, seeing it can trigger people going through trauma or get triggered easily might find it hard to read. I applaud you for this work and it really is an amazing read. The writing needs a bit editing though. The writing is good but the grammar requires a bit tinkering. Some of the sentences required a little more rearranging. Overall, it's good to read."

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Die For Love

"It is so good. You should make series out of this book."

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Well written

"The story consists of up and down stuff. It is interesting to read. The start was intriguing and it made me read further more, It was a great story and I asm happy that I read it. Overall ; Nice story -Sanu-"

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Die for love

"Well, I felt that start was little rushed and there was not much information but things turned out well with the flow. It was a great story and I enjoyed reading it! Keep writing!"

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Die for Love is a Great Story with Many Twists and Exciting Action!

"I really enjoyed this story. It started off really gruesomely, with pressing issues like rape and kidnap at the center of the story. The ending was a high-drama, high-action spectacle that I'm sure a lot of people would enjoy. I do not want to spoil the story, but I thought that it was really thrilling, with hard-hitting topics. The work could use some editing, but overall, I give it five stars!"

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Very engaging!

"I noticed a few errors in your writing, nothing extremely bad but enough where it distracted me from what was going on. I also had trouble telling who was talking at a few points. Your writing style is one I typically go for but I found myself liking it more as the novel went on. It had twists and turns which kept you sucked in their world. Overall I tremendously enjoyed your work and with a little clean up this would turn into a wonderful novel"

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Lovely plot

"Although I haven't been able to read the whole thing yet, I can say that it is worth reading. I meanthe story is just so well written and so interesting. I LOVE IT and I will surely read the rest of the chapters asap and review it once more"

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Great book!

"This is a great book! This is a very interesting, and engaging book and I would really recommend it! I would love to see what other great stories you might have in the future!"

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"Overall I think it’s really good! Some of the grammar needs a little work, but I think once you fix that up you’ll have a great book on your hands! I love the drama and intensity of it all. Excellent work!!"

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Amazing

"I have read up to chapter 12 where I feel I can appropriately give my opinion! I really loved how much thought and effort had gone into the plot. The details of of the scenes are excellent, I will point out I did get a little confused at times in terms of characters. I felt too much was going on so just spacing out the scenes with one or two characters at a time would do. It has a good flow to the story a few grammatical errors but they can be fixed Overall, very enjoyable i will be reading the rest 😊 "

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