What is your opinion?
Bounded Strings
"This one was a bot different than my normal werewolf/fantasy romances. I appreciate the difference and really enjoyed reading it!"
Bounded Strings
"I like it, but it needs editing like grammar errors and repetition of words, but it's a nice book, ngl. I really enjoyed the plots and trying to guess what's gonnna happen next."
Amazing!
"I loved every second I've spent so far reading this novel. Sue has created memorable characters and such believable bonds between them. It has romance, a little bit of mystery a dash of fantasy and it's just a great time. You are compelled to keep reading no matter how tired you may feel thanks to its easy to follow structure and binge-worthy plot. The author is incredibly skilled at descriptions too which is a huge bonus if you're looking for immersion. The errors in grammar however are highlighted because of the high quality of the piece overall, but it doesn't detract from the experience. I will definitely keep reading and looking forward to future chapters :)"
Review
"I’ve really liked your book so far. I can see you’ve given a lot of thought into the characters and the plot was quite enjoyable. And I quite liked your writing style. As far as grammar and punctuation goes I am myself haven’t noticed any mistakes. With that being said good luck to you. Keep up the good work. Can’t wait to read more soon."
Great potential!
"I'm really enjoying your story so far. I like the dynamic between the friends and their difference in personalities. I found some grammatical and punctuation errors, but otherwise, the story flows nicely. The errors are an easy fix and there seems to be great potential here. I've only just read the first few chapters, but find myself wondering what will happen next with the new character introduced and the boy she's currently 'seeing'. I'll be continuing the read and following along for more chapters."
Bounded Strings
"To begin with, I really enjoyed the dynamics between all the characters. They gave life to the plot and in the best way possible. The story has both emotional and mystical aspect to it which made my reading experience even more delightful. I enjoyed how each chapter has something to offer and you can't stop turning the pages until you connect dots of the buildup. The writing style is so immensely enjoyable and unique at the same time. It's an interesting read for sure. I loved the way author has portrayed the friendship and chemistry between these characters. The introduction of a mysterious connection and possible complexities around that connection was the main hook for me. Keep creating beautiful stories! Waiting for next updates!"
Bounded Strings
"Loved it! I enjoyed reading this story. The plot is great. I love the characters and their friendship. The new character added to the story brings in more mystery and I'm curious to see how it continues. I couldn't stop reading, Great job, can't wait to see how it continues."
Loved It!
"I enjoyed the story so far so much! The plot is very interesting and so are the characters. Love the writing style. I'm waiting for more chapters. :))) Keep up the great work! ❤❤❤❤😁👍"
GREAT STORY
"You're story has a good plot. I like those title of every chapter, It kind of awakes curiosity in readers.... overall, it's a great book... I'm waiting for your update... "
Bounded Strings
"I felt like reading more until I checked again, the story is still ongoing! Well, the story is nice, but I would love to see more bite around Sierra, Eva, Zion, and Soren. Perhaps, upfront all this will be on display. The character development wasn't bad at all, a nice plot, and the story structure may be a little shaky from the start, I suggest you have to build it up nicely, seeing you still got more chapters ahead. Good effort, I must say, and the story will surely catch the attention of readers especially those who love stories centered around campus. Overall, it is a lovely storyline!"
Interesting relationships!
"I love the depiction of the relationships amongst the characters! I would love to know why the main character Evannah had to move into a new town! I wish Sierra would date. I can’t wait to see more from the mysterious Blaise. I feel like there is a lot that can be done about him. I saw some grammar errors and some sentences that had some words missing. It didn’t make it hard for me to understand, but it may be more difficult for someone whose first language is not English. So I’d read through it again to make sure I took care of any gapping grammar mistakes. Speaking to myself to of course. I like that you give some personal details about each of the characters. I love that Sierra is more observant than anyone else. I love how she notices things about her friend and brother. She seems like a big personality and you could honestly probably write a whole story just about her. I hate she got used to get close to Eva. That makes her no dating thing understandable. Keep up the good work! I can’t wait to see how you develop the story even more! "
An Engaging Read!
"I really enjoyed reading this story. It flows together wonderfully. I liked the communication amongst the characters. The Author brings great energy to her words. And the title of the book, and the character's names are very unique. Some of the punctuation and grammar could use editing. I highly recommend this story to anyone who wants to read a really engaging book!"
Bounded Strings
"I really adore the relation between Eva and Sierra. There are few issues in constructing sentences. But still I'm hooked and would like to know what happens next."
I love the story sooooooo much like it’s so cute even though the last part was kind of off it was very very nice! I love how the characters take care of each other and do what comforts each other.it was amazing. I would recommend this book to people like Andree she is my bestie. Even though the story plot grammar and all were good and the story was very engaging the writing style was a little off. I also noticed that in a part the author mistaken a characters name.
"The story was cute even though the last part was kind of off it was very very nice! I love how the characters take care of each other and do what comforts each other.it was amazing. I would recommend this book to people like Andree she is my bestie. Even though the story plot grammar and all were good and the story was very engaging the writing style was a little off. I also noticed that in a part the author mistaken a characters name. "
Great start
"I can't wait to find out where the story is going. Only a few chapters and I'm hooked. "
So good!
"The book was extremely well written and I absolutely love the relationship between Eva and Sierra. There are only a few chapter so far, so I'm exited to see what's to come. Overall fantastic job."
Anxious
"Wondering where this may go "
Love it!
"I love it! I love the plot and your writing style, it really keeps the reader hooked and any complaint I have has already been mentioned so I feel there is no need to repeat it. I absolutely fell in love with the characters' relationship, it feels so real and relatable. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review your work. Keep writing."
Review Exchange
"You seem to use her and she a bit too often. It’s not too noticeable but it could do with some editing. For example in the first sentence you write “her padded feet” her just writing padded feet would be enough as you use “she walked later on” Again you write “cookies she and her mother made together”.You could just write cookies they made together and virtually no impact would be lost. Writing too plainly, i.e. spelling things out for the reader can make writing come across as puerile. The writing seems to be a bit rambling, Evannah seems to be lonely. You mention this again and again but there’s no real sentence variation, which makes it a bit boring to read. You also mention the backstory. Personally I’d just spend one sentence on it. It feels a bit too soon to bring it up. There’s plenty of time to slowly reveal the past in the other chapters. The tense itself is fine, as is the 3rd person point of view. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect. A quick reread and edit would easily solve this. If you are having problems with writing flow, I’d suggest rewriting each chapter at least twice, the second rewrite slows time for sprucing up all the technical aspects of writing. "
Great Potential
"I really enjoyed the writing style and thats what kept me hooked. You have a wonderful way with words and the way you describe the situation, personalities, and surrounding without really telling the reader. I like Sierra's character and can relate to her. I felt her loneliness, the feeling of belonging without really fitting in. I still am waiting for conflict to arise in the story. I'm not sure where the plot is taking me, what the issues will be. I have a feeling there's going to be a revelation about each characters' parents, maybe some relationship developing with your lead characters. When I read the summary and prologue I thought it would be a fantasy novel, maybe I interpreted it incorrectly. But overall, it's a good start. I hope you start introducing some elements of the plot. You have to continue writing because I sincerely enjoyed it. "
