What is your opinion?
Brilliant!
"Honestly I absolutely love your story. Most of the time when you talk about Giants all you can think about is how treacherous they are. However you put them in a new perspective. Your writing is very descriptive and easy to read. Keep up the beautiful work! "
Nice
"So I liked it. I don't I saw or noticed anything I didn't like. And with that said I will say that without a doubt that your book has made it to my top ten. Thank you for your patience and brilliant and creative mind."
KINTSUkuroi
"Nice work. The Story went well, but I suggest you stop using Savan, the reagent giant leader, and the woman to describe Savan, just use Savan only when she came to the human realm to allow for clarity. The creativity was awesome and it made an interesting read. Well done."
KINTSUkuroi
"I love the story line, the fresh new perspective and genre in this story, making me wanted to read more. The concept is original. I love how you introduce to us the story in your prologue ❤️. The childhood meeting of Ciel and Nicolas is like revisiting your own childhood days and I like it. There are some minor errors on spelling and grammar but aside from that,good story!"
It's hitting the right places.
"I love how the writer of this story just hits me with life's realities with such precision. I never thought that that would be possible with a sort of teen fiction kind of story, but it does. It's real. It's here, and you wouldn't want to miss reading this. Honestly, I was attracted to the "Kintsukuroi" concept because I learned of "Kintsugi" a while back, and the meaning behind it was just beautiful and in some way....healing. And yes, this story does bring a kind of healing into light, especially relating to Nicolas here btw. < 3 Technical-wise, I did spot a few spelling errors but it's minor so it was okay. The description was a bit lacking for a fantasy type of story but, you know what? The way the writer expressed his thoughts in the story was really simple, and truly, this book is really straightforward to read. I grew fond of that charm after the next few chapters into the story. I guess this might have been intended because the way it was written was more focused on the emotions of the characters, and I find that really admirable because that is something I lack with writing. So yeah, I'll be reading on to find out how Ciel and Nic's story ends. To the author, kudos to you for such a masterpiece. :D Thanks for sharing!"
Its like the story is happening in real life!
"Other than minor grammar issues, I loved everything. The description is so abundant it was like a movie in my mind."
Good read!
"I really like the plot and theme of this book. The authors writing helped draw me in despite it being a genre I don't read much of. Looking forward to more!"
Great plot
"I have not read any fantasy fiction in years, yet the first few chapters of your story have pulled me in. The plot of the story is very intriguing and I look forward to reading about this potential relationship Ciel and the boy may have. Your writing style and overall theme of the story make for an easy, pleasant read. I will be following along for more to the story!"
Wow!
"I love the plot and back story. The character development is amazing in the few chapters that are available at the moment and I cannot wait to read more. The story is so authentic and like a breath of fresh air! Well done, and keep it up! I look forward to seeing where this goes!"
I absolutely love this book!
"When I started reading I had no idea I will be pulled into a world of humans and giants but still feel connected to the emotions of the characters. I want to know more about the world they are surrounded with but to be honest I love reading about the emotional and mental state of the characters living in a world instead of the world itself in general. That being said, I surely enjoyed this story so far and waiting for next updates!!"
Very Unique!
"I loved the idea about giants and humans living in the same world, yet having to remain separate from one another. To me it seems like that story is blossoming into one of forbidden love between two beings who likely would have never ended up together if it weren't for fate. I liked how you first went into their backstory as children, only to reunite them later on. This book is very creative and I hope you continue writing it. :)"
Amazing
"I love the overall story of giants and humans co-existing together, and how they got to that point. Author does a great job describing each character's personalities and it's lovely to see in the beginning of the story its focus is on not really fixing, but healing a life that is broken. It sets up the story well. It's very well written, I like your writing style, the only thing I would like to see more is their world. It doesn't have to be extremely detailed, just some description, to give the reader visual of their environment. Other than that, great job. Will the main characters be able to unite two separate worlds? We'll see...I loved it, and can't wait to read more."
KINTSUkoroi
"I read six chapters which are available for now and I really enjoyed it. I would love to see more of the surroundings and also more of the main characters relationship when they were younger. I look forward to see what will happen between them. Also, I love the analogy between the Human and the Giant. From what I can tell, is she going to safe him? Change him? Show him the better life? I am really interested in how it all could end between them. Considering, this should be a romance, they will probably fall in love with each other but could it work? 🤔 so many questions 🤗 Overall, you did a great job so far, keep it up. Thank you for sharing your work 🙏❤️"
Smooth Sailing
"The plot is orderly, but needs more setting context. I felt like some details that could’ve been shared were skipped over in the prologue. You need to work a bit more on your grammar and run on sentences, but overall I really loved your writing style. It’s very thought provoking, and poetic, and I love the subtle metaphorical hints you dropped here and there. They were very easy to pick up on. Thus brings me to the overall story. It has great potential, ‘twas very digestible, and I can’t wait to see more of the story unfold. Keep up the good work!"
Compelling and inviting read
"Well, I know what I like and what I like is good writing, characters with life breathed into them, and a plot I can follow but not predict. All of that and more is happening in this story, it's very rich and compelling, the author has really painted a brave new world with words. It would never have usually occurred to me to read a story where the 'unknown quantity' is giants, but I actually really love it. Can't wait to see where it's going, I will keep reading for sure, well done on a unique selling point, too! (I've only taken one point off writing skills because there's a divider in the middle of some text in one chapter)"
Overall good
"I have to be completely honest here, this is not my cup of tea but I genuinely liked the story. I can see that your writing has refined over time when looking through the prologue chapters, what stood out for me most was the use of words like buxom and ravenette . I don't mean to be harsh here, but the romance between the two characters needs work. Your writing is good because I was able to see it play out in my mind, Keep up the awesome writing, and I just hope that you dive into heavier subjects, it might be my personal opinion but I love it when books dive into deep subjects like alcoholism, drug abuse, sexual assault, and mental health issues. And I do recommend you to do that because you have a platform where people could reach you. In conclusion, the only things you have to work on are punctuation, grammar, and writing romantic scenes. In romantic scenes, try to set the atmosphere, and the mood first and then dive into the stuff. Other than that, you are golden."
Interesting plot!!
"I found this quite interesting. Plot is great!! Excited to read further!! ❤Great efforts though!! "
Very Engaging!
"I loved the initial premise of the story, and the explanation of what Kintsukuroi is (a nice touch of simile there). But what kept me reading was the topic it explored. Nicolas is not merely shy, but a traumatised child, and this provides this character and the story with a deeper layer of meaning. You have a good ear for dialogue, and I love how you get us to discover Ciel's and Nicolas' personalities through their actions and reactions. Nice pace too. However, your descriptions need a bit of work, particularly on the first chapter (Prologue I). Also, be mindful of your grammar and how your sentences sound. For instance, the last line of Prologue I: "Little did they know at that time that that decision would..." You have 3 'that's in a single sentence. Try instead: "Little did they know then that their decision would..." By Prologue III your writing was more solid and refined - you should try to keep that level in your entire work, so that it flows cohesively throughout. I also loved that when they find the police, you provide us with a solid backstory to their bureaucratic practices, which also illustrates the world you've created. However, I was wishing to know - where did the giants come from? How and when did they meet humans? How did their war start? Ciel can shapeshift - do giants have any other super powers? Perhaps you tell us more about these later, but by Prologue III I was already curious. Also, the Psychologist tells Savan that Nicolas is completely 'emotionless' - What would be the medical term for that? If he's a health professional he should speak like one. Your story is very engaging and your characters are realistic and believable, plus you have a very interesting topic in how trauma in childhood can affect human (even human-giant) relationships. Why would Ciel care for him, he doubts - exploring that wound will give your readers quite a ride. Keep on polishing your story and you'll have a sure winner."
Interesting read
"To start with, I really liked the theme of this story. It's unexpected and not something I would usually read but I'm glad that I did. I like to read a plot which is not easy to predict and the author has done a great job regarding that. One thing I appreciate (which caught me off guard but in a good way) in this plot is the stark contrast between two main characters (Ceil being bold and upfront while Nic being the complete opposite of it) and a break from stereotypical gender roles. I would recommend it to my friends and look forward to see where this story goes!!"
Interesting Plot!
"To begin with, I really found the plot of the story very interesting. It is very well written and the overall theme of the story stands out well. As an author, you've done complete justice in bringing out the story very well and making the readers feel a part of it :) Good job author!! Keep shining!!"
