Lay

@Larsbar

Horror / Thriller / Fantasy writer

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Amazing writing style

I love how this book begins with such a thrilling event as having the door slammed in her face by her parents, this just begins the question of what’s going on and it makes the reader want to know more! Very nicely written tho it could use a bit of grammar checking, I have the same issue in my writing, however overall the plot is very good and this is a book I would for sure recommend!

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Descriptive

I love how descriptive the writing style is, it really makes you feel as though you’re in the middle of the story, and that’s the best kind of story in my opinion, can’t wait to read more!

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Loveee

This is a very well written and interesting novel. I love the plot and the writing style is amazing! Very well done

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Must read

Very well written, I loved the plot and was on the edge of my seat throughout. Nice work!

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Great

I really enjoyed reading this story! It’s super interesting and I love horror and murder books! This was for sure a page turner in my books, well done

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Great work

Although I’ve only gotten to read one chapter of this story so far, I am very intrigued and can’t wait to read more. Very well written, nicely done

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Great work

The characters are very dynamic and developed in this book, it’s got a very interesting plot and storyline and is very well written. Definitely would recommend

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Interesting

This book is unique and captivating, I found myself on the edge of my seat throughout! Nicely done, a few things however are not worded correctly and there is a few grammar mistakes, however this is overall a very enthralling experience as it allows you to dive deep into the world where ancient is combined with modern to create a very unique and interesting concept

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Nice work

Wow! This book is very intriguing and haunting. I love the plot, and the writing style is really great nicely done!

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Great job

I liked the concept of this novel and it was very beautifully written. This book is a must read, it’ll have you on the edge of your seat!

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